Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!
Well this is my first wall I submited here. This is probally not the best, I only started to make wallpapers and only know the basics. I would really like C&C so i know what i can improve. Enjoy
Overall a good start but the background looks a bit fuzzy and I can't really tell if those are clouds or trees? Sorry :(. I'm looking forward to more of your work in the future. ^_^
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I'll cut you some slack because its your first wall and you used a texture. But, if the next one is the same, I'll bitch about how "scan + stock" does NOT = wall. I do like, however, the feel this one has, I just don't like the clouds.
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This is not bad for your first wallpaper. Though some improvements are needed. It's a bit fuzzy and the colours could use a bit of work. The clouds looks like it's dripping and have to agree with december that some of the clouds do look like trees. But the overall look does represent some of a water colour that was painted on a canvas. The text is ok and the whole perspective does fit with saber but try to make a wallpapers perspective show some what of the character. All in all, it's not bad for your first wallpaper. Don't give up just yet. Learn from your mistakes and you'll make a great wallpaper.
SImnple, clean and crisp! a very well done wall. I give you props for the simplicity and not takin it too far with effects.! love the background and the grainy texture with the scan. Great work on that. Could have used a differnt font to go well with the overall theme and look of the wall but I like it still! good job, favorites in my book!
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THATS SO AMZING! the bg is ABSOLUTLY pErFeCt! i love the trees, and how uve done the trees in the clouds, Hehe XD thats so UWSOM!! i love the textures!! the whole wall is very Sweet, and cute! I lIKE IT SoO MUCH!!
Favs! ;D
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You've done quite well for your first wallie. the clouds look a little odd (you can put much effort in there!). also, the background could use a little more...flavour, if you know what i mean. the scan looks good too...
well, for your first wallie, i would add it to my fav!
Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing with us!
This is simple and sweet wallpaper, but something is wrong with the texture you used for the background/clouds. but i do like the color. its a good start, could be a little more complex with your next one though.
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Practice makes perfect. It's only way, so make more wallies and you defenetly will be better :).
About wallpaper is very good for your first, but I can't tell what is on bg, trees or clouds. ;p.
Last, but not least Saber is beautiful, so your debut goes to my fav's :)
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It is very good your wallpaper of Fate Stay Night like you have made your wallpaper the orange bottom and the clouds are very well made...
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well, for your first wallie, i would add it to my fav!
Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing with us!
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next time try to use brighter color background..it should looks better^^
thx for sharing..
About wallpaper is very good for your first, but I can't tell what is on bg, trees or clouds. ;p.
Last, but not least Saber is beautiful, so your debut goes to my fav's :)
It is very good your wallpaper of Fate Stay Night like you have made your wallpaper the orange bottom and the clouds are very well made...
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