Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!
The wall really feels kind of sad and empty, especially since the character image is so far over to the right and is mostly off the screen. You might want to think about repositioning it, maybe shifting the wall around to have her as more of the main focus. As it is right now, you did a great job the lighting, shading, and texturing, but it just feels way too empty and kind of boring and the focus seems off.
As the others have said, i also love this wall. its kinda sad and it really goes with the mood(that i think) its supposed to follow. but it is kinda off the center and the left side is kinda empty.
Nice grunge wall. A little bit on the dark side and it gives it a heavy and lonely feel. Nice addition of the feathers. I would have liked the image to standout more the image feels like its sinking with the background. I think the image is well placed and there is balance in the elements in the wall. Good job.
Haha! You're right! People do actually read other's comments beforehand! I never took the time until now when you asked me to take anothe look. You've done good by repositioning the piece to the center. She looks so depressed..like someone used her and then threw her in a muddy ditch. Nice work. :)
Another beautiful wallee made by u... its so cooL.. shes so pretty... very discreet... ^^... the feeling it emits is very similar with mine... ^^,... anyways... uv done a very good job... ^^, tekker..
Much improved over the old version of the wallpaper, the wall looks much more attractive and interesting now. The only real issue is with the top, it looks kind of empty; you might want to consider adding some dramatic-looking text to cap things off (look at Bantam's End of Evangelion wall for a good example of this). Still, great job improving what you did!
Nicely done on the text. It looks good; you can also try other tricks with text such as adding a slight glow (using new layers, duplicate/ratisized layers, etc), setting text to overlay, etc. Nice job, I really appriciate you listening to my advice and trying something new. It's nice to see someone on AP who listens to crits and improves their work by doing so.
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EDIT: I repositioned the wallpaper.
ANOTHER EDIT: I added text. :3
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nice work overall.
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Love that grunge. And she looks sooo lonely...
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