Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!
Wow.. its very pretty. ^^
I like the character and the effects that you used. I like the background too.. ^^ simple and stuff, but good.
THe only thing that I have to pick at is the character is too dark. If she were brighter, I think it'd be better.
Overall it's very good. ^^ Nice work!
Ooh! this is very nice! i like the shape of the clouds but the way you positioned them makes it look like a pattern.. maybe if they varied in size & shades more? and the white moon looks cool but the black one seems to pop out a bit.. but other than those little things, very pretty!
The light and the dark coloring of the character dont go too well with each other. the character needs to be brightened up. (maybe the the effect of the light? ^_^)
Not bad, I wish there are more stars though... oh and the swirls are so pixelated and you might want to brighten up the character somemore just to bring her into the center of attention.. with the things as they are now, I am more attracted to the background than anything else :/
The clouds look a little too light for a nightsky, so you might want to make them darker. And the lighting effects are jagged. If you could find a way to make your lighting effects (and some of your comets) smooth, that would be nice. You also might want to make the girl a little bit lighter, since she's surrounded by light but still appears to be dark. The smaller moon stands out oddly, and it looks like it's going to fall on the girl. To make it look distant, set the layer of the smaller moon on screen.
Well, there should be more stars, the black moon really stands out, there should be a little glow effect around the white moon, the clouds are too bright and sometimes you really overused the smudge tool on them, the bigger shootings stars have jaggede lines, and the white lines around the girl is really pixelated. Ehh...sorry to say thins, but there are quite a few things to fix on that wall :ninja:
It's a little cliched but tha's all right. And the clouds look a little weird because they look like a pattern (their sizes look the same). What irks me is that little dark planet (or moon) on the upper left of the wallpaper. The swirly things around her are jagged, so maybe you could try to make it smoother. And yeah, what nuniko-san said. :)
Everything looks good except the light flowing down her body. There are some places where it has a very discontinuous flow and indeed it loses its feel of light and it looks more solid.
I don't like the color of the background..
did she jump from the sky or up to wat?
and wat is the light refer to?
is it strom or wat?
but i like the pic of her. When she thinkin of somethin
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I like the character and the effects that you used. I like the background too.. ^^ simple and stuff, but good.
THe only thing that I have to pick at is the character is too dark. If she were brighter, I think it'd be better.
Overall it's very good. ^^ Nice work!
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Keep it up! :D
For nicer stars, you could go to http://gallery.artofgregmartin.com/tuts_arts/making_a_star_field.html for a tutorial.
I hope that helped you. :)
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did she jump from the sky or up to wat?
and wat is the light refer to?
is it strom or wat?
but i like the pic of her. When she thinkin of somethin