Wow it's been an eternity since i started doing this wall...but i'm finally uploading it...hope you like it...
lots of vectors !! too many sexy girls to vector =P coulden't stop XD...almost 200 layers...
i used some brushes for the bg...looked too real so i try to give it more like a painted style...
applying shadows and stuff to the bodies also took a lot of work....
Please comment !
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OK! NO MORE ARTIFACTS...
the artifacs were because the image size was too big...when i uploaded it, AP downgraded it's quality...
one thing is too rush a project to move foward...but uploading something full of artifacts ?? NO WAY !!
I'd redo those clouds (and make the beach more, well, beach coloured).
It looks like the clouds were made with the cloud filter and that always looks naff, tbh. You're much better off painting them, using pre-made brushes or smudging and blurring. Also a sky should always have a gradient to it (darker blue on the horizon, for example), and yours looks more like a solid colour, which looks less realistic.
Last off, nice vectors, but they need some shadowing under them on the sand, and you could do with messing the sand up a bit more so it has footbrints and stuff in it (and it should be more yellow).
It turned out nice but why is there so many artifacts?!? did you save for web at 70%? i'm with tris, the wall definitely needs some touch ups (not really liking the text). but overall it looks good, the vectors are really nice. it's just the artifacts, they're ruining it for me ;p
Let's say that when i finished the vectors, really couldn't do a decent beach bg....so i went quick with it so i could move foward to a new project...so i agree with all your comments about the beach, kind of sucks...
so i hope that in some time, when i have more experience, i could redo the beach...or think in a another type of bg...something abstract....i don't now....
thnks for comment !
what happens when you edit a wall you already sent ?
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Nice vector and the re colouring! Must of took ages for u! But with such a good vector you could do better with the bg i think. Redo the beach would be cool for this wall.
And how does it works around here? The bigger the "melon" closer position to the screen? hehe
Sweet job on vector! Keep it up :D
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Awww Edibomb! you spent sooo much time on this vector, i was expecting something more grand
when you edit...you edit, notthing happens except that your new version of whatever is put up. so you should reupload a better version with less artifacts.
the text really doesn't fit this wall..the sky and water is a bit blurry too imo. the sand. could be more golden and less brownn.
aww. just awesome job on the girls but the bg kinda degrades it :( o well. good job!
I like the vectors on the girls
they look hot and sexy and i like the mellon lawl
hmm other than that... i like the parity girls at the BLEACH lawl ^_- gj
+fav ill wall it for a while too
*grin* I love this paper. I think you captured the girls' personalities wonderfully. The sky could use a bit of work, however. The clouds that go below the horizon seem a bit odd to me.
Oh i remember this one from its Session Zero days...cant remeber if i commented on it then or not. Anywayz glad to see it got accepted. Is there a symbolical meanin to that huge melon? Ok, ignore that question cos its irrelevant.
Good vector work and i like wut you did with the hair. The clouds are a bit un-beach like or maybe unnatural is the better term. So that needs work. the beach background is alrite but the ocean should be a bit darker than the sky..dats how it is in real life rt? But the whole paint effect worls well. Overall you did a nice job.
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Wow it's been an eternity since i started doing this wall...but i'm finally uploading it...hope you like it...
lots of vectors !! too many sexy girls to vector =P coulden't stop XD...almost 200 layers...
i used some brushes for the bg...looked too real so i try to give it more like a painted style...
applying shadows and stuff to the bodies also took a lot of work....
Please comment !
See ya!
OK! NO MORE ARTIFACTS...
the artifacs were because the image size was too big...when i uploaded it, AP downgraded it's quality...
one thing is too rush a project to move foward...but uploading something full of artifacts ?? NO WAY !!
does my english sucks ??
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It looks like the clouds were made with the cloud filter and that always looks naff, tbh. You're much better off painting them, using pre-made brushes or smudging and blurring. Also a sky should always have a gradient to it (darker blue on the horizon, for example), and yours looks more like a solid colour, which looks less realistic.
Last off, nice vectors, but they need some shadowing under them on the sand, and you could do with messing the sand up a bit more so it has footbrints and stuff in it (and it should be more yellow).
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where's the sand? it says girls at the beach but the ground really doesnt look that way. ;)
so i hope that in some time, when i have more experience, i could redo the beach...or think in a another type of bg...something abstract....i don't now....
thnks for comment !
what happens when you edit a wall you already sent ?
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And how does it works around here? The bigger the "melon" closer position to the screen? hehe
Sweet job on vector! Keep it up :D
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when you edit...you edit, notthing happens except that your new version of whatever is put up. so you should reupload a better version with less artifacts.
the text really doesn't fit this wall..the sky and water is a bit blurry too imo. the sand. could be more golden and less brownn.
aww. just awesome job on the girls but the bg kinda degrades it :( o well. good job!
they look hot and sexy and i like the mellon lawl
hmm other than that... i like the parity girls at the BLEACH lawl ^_- gj
+fav ill wall it for a while too
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Good vector work and i like wut you did with the hair. The clouds are a bit un-beach like or maybe unnatural is the better term. So that needs work. the beach background is alrite but the ocean should be a bit darker than the sky..dats how it is in real life rt? But the whole paint effect worls well. Overall you did a nice job.
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