After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
Please tell my if this is good. I have been working on this for days. Butttttttttttttt... before I could get an answer the session Zero form disappeared (go look it's not there) so I guess this is its replacement. Sorry for my rant. I just want to finish this. (ps. I want the old form back.)
Wow... New Session Zero is kind of weird...
At any rate. I think that the concept is good, here, but the vectored look and the blurred effect don't match well together.
Clean up the vector, and it will look much better.
Basically, the vector needs to be more detailed. and less blochy, and less blurry.
plus with a lack of creativity and catchy colors. keep working on it.
Yes the vector is REALLY too blurry and the point of using a grey background with some flashy blue isn't really great in my mind...
Also the face is maybe a bit too huge...
The text isn't centered and I don't really like that bloky font even if I guess it's for the manga...
She's looking sweet as usual... But you put her in a very dark wall with a hard blocky font... I don't know something makes me feel strange on this wall...
It doesn't seems really right in the mood if you see what I mean... :-s
OK. I am using inkscape & the gimp... so photoshop stuff doesn't work (sometimes)
so what I'm looking for is NO OUTLINES, if you know how to sharpen a line without using a BLACK LINE,.,...,.,.,,,.,PLEASE TELL ME!!!!^_^!!!!!!*2!!
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Actually, I kind of like the blurred look, but if you use this pic you should tweak the text a little too so the edges aren't as sharp. As for the centering of the text... that's good enough.
The image wasn't blurred except the mouth. I retraced the image in inkscape so it "looks" blurry. Here is an example of what it looks like up close.( upclose ) and this is an example of what I want.( whatIwant )
Naturally the two individuals involved also have radically different personalities. Alita is well-mannered and genteel, in every sense the perfect princess; Falis is anything but that. Whereas Alita is much more timid, however, Falis is a take-charge, kick-butt-and-take- names-later kind of gal, and her confidence and skill make her into the ideal princess for defending a kingdom against marauding threats. Far less suited is she to addressing Alita's subjects, however, as her first such endeavor abundantly proves. Despite being an equal participant in the soul transfer, though, Alita quickly takes a back seat to the much more colorful Falis, who is the focal point of most of what happens. That is, of course, because it's so much cooler to watch a young lady in full princess regalia acting ill-mannered and swinging a katana with great force and precision. The fanboys out there also get their share of moe and general cuteness content from the android twins, but beyond them and the butler Jodo, the rest of the cast just fades into the background. This is much more a one-woman story than an ensemble cast piece.
Everything that it comes of Evangelion is everything of good and this also wallpaper it is in the certain way, I adored this effect, I do not know as it calls itself, but name it written it was very interesting I also liked it side in Japanese Ayanami Rei
It has good concept. This has very high potential. although i believe it is blurry and just not enough. I mean the image is not proportioned and may be too crowded. if for anything, i'd say putting more color is in order, making it more lively. And remember, sometimes ^^ being simple is being perfect. ^_^
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At any rate. I think that the concept is good, here, but the vectored look and the blurred effect don't match well together.
Clean up the vector, and it will look much better.
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plus with a lack of creativity and catchy colors. keep working on it.
Also the face is maybe a bit too huge...
The text isn't centered and I don't really like that bloky font even if I guess it's for the manga...
She's looking sweet as usual... But you put her in a very dark wall with a hard blocky font... I don't know something makes me feel strange on this wall...
It doesn't seems really right in the mood if you see what I mean... :-s
Sorry I guess it's not really useful...
Or not...
:D
Take blu3's advice as well and make the vector a lot sharper and more detailed.
so what I'm looking for is NO OUTLINES, if you know how to sharpen a line without using a BLACK LINE,.,...,.,.,,,.,PLEASE TELL ME!!!!^_^!!!!!!*2!!
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We are not speaking about outlines.. We are speaking about the way your colors are all smooth on the edges and look REALLY blurry!
This looks like you add a filter to blur everything... Clean those edges.
Or not...
:D
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