This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.
While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.
Hmmm . I got some people criticize my work on my previous wallpaper.That my work is so ammatuer. Sorry about that !! cause iam just experimenting. So i made this wallpaper again in different version which i like the dark side. :)
so enjoy>>!
updated: Thanks for your comments. If there are more correction pls do tell :)
Hi there...
well i'm sorry if i was to hard on you the last time.. but now i have to comment the same thing... cause i'm an ordinary member and i know how it is to get your walls rejected.. I have some of my wall (which are pretty good stuff) rejected before... and here i see a common member with a simple wall.. which i think that if an ordinary member like me was going to submit this.. it would sure get rejected...
the problem is.. that your extraction looks really bad. Your grass is not well made.. and the stuff at the background look as if you have place them randomly. I thing this wallpaper lacks in composition.
Sorry but that is what i think, and i honest when i have to comment about walls.
Getting your work accepted in here is really hard, so i thing you need to work some more.. to give the example to members like me and others.
I agree a hundred percent with clarings. I mean, the grass..come one, I think a commun member can do better than this. Why not give it more detail or use other grass brushes other than the adobe defaults. And the extraction needs work. I think you could have done so much better, im disappointed to see this. I mean back to the grass, it looks like shes standing in a three foot hole, it shows none of her legs, it looks like the ground is consuming her.
Sorry about this, but i have to third most of the criticism. The grass could use a lot of work. There are a lot of tutorials out there for grass. Also, to me, the moon looks a bit too fuzzy/blurry. I like the idea of the red moon and the darker feel. The fog/smoke looks fine to me, but the dark clouds make it feel a bit flat. As stated earlier, the stuff in the back does seem randomly placed and the scan could use a lot of work. Again I apologize for all of the criticism, but just remember that criticism is just here to help you.
I think it's agood wall, but the nice dark atmosphere is destroyed by this bright green grass. It looks like she has no legs or something.Anyway after download I have cuted the grass out and now it looks better and has better size for my wide screen desktop^^
The background's environment is good, though the used colors are a bit strange together. The character is looking good in her clothes, she fits to the background well. The title is good too, even a bit funny. Nice wallpaper.
I think that...that scan you used, has nothing to do with Genshiken.. in fact, i think it's most likely to be from Shakugan no Shana.. though that's not her uniform, but the thing she has on the back surely is her sword, so.. it's also very obvious that, that scan was drawn by Noiji Itoh... but going to the wallpaper matters, i don't like the grass...maybe because is too bright and it seems like she is not behind that grass.. and the red moon doesn't look real neither... anyway, the scan still looks too cute =3!
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so enjoy>>!
updated: Thanks for your comments. If there are more correction pls do tell :)
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well i'm sorry if i was to hard on you the last time.. but now i have to comment the same thing... cause i'm an ordinary member and i know how it is to get your walls rejected.. I have some of my wall (which are pretty good stuff) rejected before... and here i see a common member with a simple wall.. which i think that if an ordinary member like me was going to submit this.. it would sure get rejected...
the problem is.. that your extraction looks really bad. Your grass is not well made.. and the stuff at the background look as if you have place them randomly. I thing this wallpaper lacks in composition.
Sorry but that is what i think, and i honest when i have to comment about walls.
Getting your work accepted in here is really hard, so i thing you need to work some more.. to give the example to members like me and others.
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Especially soft coloring is very great. +_+
It is a very lovely character.