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Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago
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I had a version of this with the blurry leaves falling that were bigger, but I think I like it better more plain since that's a bit cliche.
Do you think I need text or do you like it how it is?
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Of course, my idea could be completely wack, but just see if it works or not. I think it's fine without text. You've filled up the wall enough with the characters.
and lol I just noticed how Haruhi doesn't really have shadows, except around her legs, except they're in the opposite direction as the shadows cast by Yumi and Mikuru. XD
well first of all i think you need to give credit to the vector creator... so that we can see his work :P
secondly i think that the characters are not blending well with your background... cause they seam like floating in there... the interaction between the characters and the background it poor.. you have just added some leaves... maybe some grass coming between the leaves can help you with the blending issue.. cause you can add some grass a make it goes a bit over the characters...
and i don't think that you need a text... the images are too big.. and fill the wall enough... so there is no space left for a text ^_^
hope this helps you
wish you luck!
kisses..
I do have to agree with clarings, though. There could be more interaction with the charaters and the background. It also seems that you might want to shrink the characters a little. For some reasons, it seems as if they were crammed into the paper.
The vectors were good, but you might want to play arond with the paper in general.
--AzN_PlaYEr
Another way you could make the background interact with the characters better is to change the leaves so that they are less transparent and more solid. I think the transparency that you've given them gives it so much depth that it makes the characters look as if they are floating.
Sorting the shadows underneth the characters should help too. Esspecially around Haruhi (which as already been mentioned), you need to remember where the light source is coming from. Also it might be quite nice to make the shadows a bit more jaggedy, sounds a bit wierd but it'll help make them look like they are laying on the leaves and make it look more realistic. Maybe finding an image of someone else laying on leaves with a shadow will be a good referance for you to see what I mean.
Good luck with the changes once you've made them you'll have an awesome.
Sorry. I know it's not your fault. I'll just have to work on something else!
Hm, I think it looks pretty good. I know the shadows are part of the original scan so I won't say anything about that...texture on the leaves is a great idea...everything's pretty much already been said! Good luck with this one! *Goes to sulk in corner*
"I want to go to where you are, I want to run there right now.
Even if I can’t see you, I want to trace back over our memories and feel that same happiness."
good details also... he/she made a good work
continue and it will get better more and more!