After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
Awesome, but I think the flower has to go because it doesn't mean anything or does it?. It damages the lyric. Work in the background a bit more and re try. Keep up trying
But the sunflower does matter that is basis for the lyrics. without it... what then... boringness. it would be empty and there would be no place for tom waits. it would only be gaara. the wallpaper is not of gaara it is of 'children's story'. that is its purpose. gaara was just implimented because he a sad child image people can relate to and would therefore make the background more aplicable in the wired.
thank you for your thoughts.
please if you are able listen to the song. it makes more sence. truely it does.
Yeah, the text really takes away from the overall wallpaper. I know that the wallpaper is based on the lyrics, but maybe try a different font size and move it around a bit to see what works better, because it was really hard for me to read 'since', and if it's hard to read a word then it needs fixing.
I see the divide between the meaning of the wallpaper and the look of the wallpaper. I understand why the flower needs to stay, why the text needs to stay, and why Gaara was used. And I think it's great, it's uncommon to have wallpapers with deeper meanings.
However, this is still a website about graphics -- the look of wallpapers, not the meaning, and that's why people are commenting as they are. You have the meaning down, so let's work on making the visuals fit.
The whole look of the wallpaper needs to be harmonized. The sunflower, the background, Gaara, and the lyrics need to fit visually, and they don't. Gaara has sepia tones, the sunflower is yellow, the kanji is a harsh red, the background is white and black; the textures over Gaara don't blend with the area around him, the background doesn't blend with the flower, and the kanji is just out on its own.
Pick a color theme, and choose your textures (and brushes) carefully. The right colors and textures can really bring the image together and give the impression that everything belongs there. It'll be difficult using the photograph of a sunflower and the screencap of Gaara, since they're made on different mediums (one's drawn and one's real) so concentrate on that.
I'm not sure what to say about the text. I kind of like it out there like that, because I appreciate the literature of it. As far as graphics go, it's not so good. Look around at other really good wallpapers with text to get a feeling for styles and how to make it work, and then try again.
Also, focus on Gaara: make everything in the wall work with him. (Instead of trying to make everything in the wall fit the lyrics.) It's an excellent picture choice by the way, it really works with the meaning of the song.
Good luck! I really like the concept, and I can't wait to see what you do with it next. I'd really like to see this pulled through to completion.
Ahh schwah! This is a cute scan of Gaara! I would say, try to make the lyrics more a part of the background and try to make the sunflower blend a bit more. The concept is awesome though! Keep up the good work!
I like the paper a lot...the font is tight, the lyrics are dope, the character is awesome looking in comparison to the rest of the paper...maybe try making the sunflower a little more blended into the background
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thank you for your thoughts.
please if you are able listen to the song. it makes more sence. truely it does.
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Looooove it.
So touching T-T.
However, this is still a website about graphics -- the look of wallpapers, not the meaning, and that's why people are commenting as they are. You have the meaning down, so let's work on making the visuals fit.
The whole look of the wallpaper needs to be harmonized. The sunflower, the background, Gaara, and the lyrics need to fit visually, and they don't. Gaara has sepia tones, the sunflower is yellow, the kanji is a harsh red, the background is white and black; the textures over Gaara don't blend with the area around him, the background doesn't blend with the flower, and the kanji is just out on its own.
Pick a color theme, and choose your textures (and brushes) carefully. The right colors and textures can really bring the image together and give the impression that everything belongs there. It'll be difficult using the photograph of a sunflower and the screencap of Gaara, since they're made on different mediums (one's drawn and one's real) so concentrate on that.
I'm not sure what to say about the text. I kind of like it out there like that, because I appreciate the literature of it. As far as graphics go, it's not so good. Look around at other really good wallpapers with text to get a feeling for styles and how to make it work, and then try again.
Also, focus on Gaara: make everything in the wall work with him. (Instead of trying to make everything in the wall fit the lyrics.) It's an excellent picture choice by the way, it really works with the meaning of the song.
Good luck! I really like the concept, and I can't wait to see what you do with it next. I'd really like to see this pulled through to completion.
thank you. i'll see what i can do.
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