This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.
While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.
Well I wanted this one to look like it was written on a notebook
The text and title are from a song written by Stone Temple Pilots
It wasnt too complicated tbh I just had some troubles on what to add to the paper that would look good and mean something (the blood means the effort},I think its kinda unique
First of all, Sasuke seems to be behind the lines of the notebook and the notebook you should change the layers to make it more realistic.
Second, about the blood in sasuke's body you should delete it. The blood seems to be in the notebook not in the sasuke's body.
Third, there are some sparks of blood that simply see weird in the paper...
I like the style and the idea is a unique and new one, keep working on it, personally I think you should change the lyric, i dont know if Stone Temple Pilots has something in common with Naruto...
I personally think the concept would look a lot cooler if you put less space between the lines. It looks kind of wonky right now. If you could make Sasuke look like someone doodled him on to the page, that would up the cool factor by ten times. XXDDD
And make the lyrics look like they were written on. I like what you have so far. The wallpaper has potential. Keep up the good work!
Main thing I'd say is if your goign to have lines like a text book and text, then the text and lines should line up properly (unless you go for a totally skew angle), otherwise it makes the two seem disjointed and unconnected.
Also, if you're doing that I'd go for somethgin that better resembles a hand-writing font.
Essentially, I'm saying if you have text and lines then they either need to be consistent together, or it needs to be more obvious that they're not together, if you see what I mean.
I think it has an interesting view of the character, i think that you should make the character your main focus and also the words dont seem to go well with the character himself i think personal, but its not always important.. also the lines shouldnt go through only part of the character, either all of none
Honestly, i dont like the lines at all so lose them if you can.
econdly, there is too much text, so either remove it. (or reducing it to less writing is fine also.)
Lastly, im not a fan of the "drip marks" that go through Sasuke's guitar.
Keep at it though! ^_^
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Well I wanted this one to look like it was written on a notebook
The text and title are from a song written by Stone Temple Pilots
It wasnt too complicated tbh I just had some troubles on what to add to the paper that would look good and mean something (the blood means the effort},I think its kinda unique
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First of all, Sasuke seems to be behind the lines of the notebook and the notebook you should change the layers to make it more realistic.
Second, about the blood in sasuke's body you should delete it. The blood seems to be in the notebook not in the sasuke's body.
Third, there are some sparks of blood that simply see weird in the paper...
I like the style and the idea is a unique and new one, keep working on it, personally I think you should change the lyric, i dont know if Stone Temple Pilots has something in common with Naruto...
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And make the lyrics look like they were written on. I like what you have so far. The wallpaper has potential. Keep up the good work!
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Also, if you're doing that I'd go for somethgin that better resembles a hand-writing font.
Essentially, I'm saying if you have text and lines then they either need to be consistent together, or it needs to be more obvious that they're not together, if you see what I mean.
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econdly, there is too much text, so either remove it. (or reducing it to less writing is fine also.)
Lastly, im not a fan of the "drip marks" that go through Sasuke's guitar.
Keep at it though! ^_^
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... not a complaint, but is that red stain on the right supposed to be either a seal or a sketch of a pair of ninjas dancing along?
but the text looks too artificial. it's obviously done by a program. maybe it would be better if it was written by hand with using a tablet?...
sorry, I guess I'm really fussy about text because I don't like putting letters in my walls.