Sitting at my desk, twittling my thumbs, and praying that something will magically happen and all my work will be done for the night... Long and drawn out right? :S
Well the wallpaper is O.K.. I don't mind the text on it, I feel its alright. But the bg needs a little more work and so does the scan. The idea is good though.
Hhmm..the wall is too crowded by text...tehn the scan there needs some cleaning and you need to make a background for that..as I can see it's just a plain balck there..good luck!
If you want to have text like this my suggestion would be to not have the lines diagonally crossing in front of the horizontal lines, it makes for a confused composition. My suggestion would be to play with the opacity of the lines, make some more distinct than others, and very the size of the words a bit more to give a nicer effect.
The text is ok, the font is not. try looking for fonts that are small, capitalized and thick. and why is there a glowing line across Kimimaro's chest? or is that just a bug in my PC
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text too drowded and it is really disturb me.
low quality of scan..
black background...
re-create the wallpaper i think....
good luck.
I also think that scan is in low resolution and black bg doesn't suit it :)
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