After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
Mmh...If I were you I would try to change the font. The effect you did on the wallpaper doesn´t help the image to look great. The rest is ok.
Good luck!
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Yeah i agree the font is not good try another font and the effects you used them in the wall are not really good , So what you need is to change your design and make the gilr looks good (( i mean without those effects cuz then it'll be much better )) and change the font and add som more things to the BG.
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Yea, I like the sandy effect for the border but the texture on the girl doesn't look too good. I'm sure a smoother look will contrast nicely with the border.
Like the picture frame theme,however make her image more smooth, do away with blank title name,instead maybe have the name look inscribed in the frame.Now for version.2!
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Her image is a bit too blury. But it's still very nice. The black rectangle thingies with the words in it... try and decorate it a little more XD Still KAWAII . hey i love AIR XD
It's nice I like it.
the only thing you should change is the text, maybe you use another font or add some effects on the text so it fits better with whole thing n_n
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Okay, first of all, the resolution ; 1024 x 768 is too small for a lot of members, for example I never added a 1024 x 768 wallpaper into my favorite or commented one. Because is just good for 17" screens, so if you can make higher resolution, don't hesitate.
So I agree with others comments, your wall is too blurry. The font isn't very well so try others here on DaFont. But I don't really like the black you put for your text. There is a small problem with your frame, there isn't the same larger for the 2 sides. As you can see you have to work a little bit more :p but you have done a good work ; good luck.
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lets think...i think the "black" background for the text isn't good..too shockin' with purple..maybe it's will be better if you change the colour or blurred it...^^
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the only thing you should change is the text, maybe you use another font or add some effects on the text so it fits better with whole thing n_n
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Okay, first of all, the resolution ; 1024 x 768 is too small for a lot of members, for example I never added a 1024 x 768 wallpaper into my favorite or commented one. Because is just good for 17" screens, so if you can make higher resolution, don't hesitate.
So I agree with others comments, your wall is too blurry. The font isn't very well so try others here on DaFont. But I don't really like the black you put for your text. There is a small problem with your frame, there isn't the same larger for the 2 sides. As you can see you have to work a little bit more :p but you have done a good work ; good luck.
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lets think...i think the "black" background for the text isn't good..too shockin' with purple..maybe it's will be better if you change the colour or blurred it...^^