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i start this wall from 2 sketches of mine (really -_-). I scanned them then started to color. It took 10 solid hour.
After that, i did seem to come up with any idea for the wall so i just made it this way
for anyone who watched Shakugan no Shana, you probably know what I mean in this wall :)
That's about all. For those who want to see the original sketches and the non-text version, please contact me
Nice idea, really like the concept, but the flames aren't that impressive as they could be, it's a bit sad..i have the desire to edit that wall in photoshop..would be perfect then xD
Ooo...i like the concept of it. Good colors too. But i agree with Felesya that the flames could be made better. Also, i think if the body size and everything were the same size it would look better. Like the half of the guys face should match accordingly with shana's face. and only one size =[ otherwise good job tho!
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I love what you did in the wall too , the blue flames and whats around the characters looks good :) but the red flame might need more work , the main thing that might need fixing is the line and the diffrent with the character and the size should match with both of them .
overall this wall has a nice concept and the drweing look good ^^ , keep up the good work :) .
But as has been pointed out (and should be reinforced), the biggest problem is that Yuji and Shana aren't the same size, so instead of looking like a person split in half, it looks kinda clunky. If you could line them up better, and perhaps show their faces in full, this wall would improve 500%
Hmm...the make-up and conception is pretty good. however, i don't like how you "separated" the two characters though...the faded out black bar kinda bothers me. also, perhaps some cooler "flame effects" would be nice as well.
Great Shana wall... the split image is fantastic, yuigi with the blue soul flames and shana with the red hot flames looks excellent! keep up the great work hope to see more!! :D
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Agree with Felesya on the flames - the wisps of "torch" power-of-existence fire at top left are pretty neat, but much work still needed on the rest of it - especially the real fire flames at the right, those little wisps at top just don't work for me.
I love the concept and the work you did from the sketch to coloring in, but imho the background doesn't do it justice. I'd definitely suggest trying to improve on it because I think it would look much nicer if the flames were done better.
Another thing; I can appreciate that you're trying to depict their actual height, but I agree with kird that perhaps matching the two sides more symmetrical might look better.
The sketch and the coloring that you did is awesome. No complaints there ^^ But the flames in the background are kind of a let down...they seem too artificial compared to the sketches. It would have been awesome if you sketched the flames and colored them in, so the whole wall would have the same style.
Otherwise, I'm really impressed with your coloring. And of course, your sketching skills as well. Heaven knows my sketches look like a furry mothball gone berserk >_> Nice work :)
I love the idea, Very clean and yet simple.
I might have to say that the flames need a tad bit of work compared to the character to make them blend in more.
Still you did a wonderful job.
Prety good but i dont realy like the separation of them.i think it is a bit too big.besides i think the fire in shana part wold be better if you add some more and make it more like burning.and reduce the torch flame in the yuji part,it was too much torch flame in there.shana picture and yuji hands are not realy good too.i don't realy like the top and the bottom part of the picture, you cut it with black color.it would be better if you don't cut it and could you please show shana's and yuji's face
The concept is pretty good.
But you should improve on the flames.
I really wish that they have eyes so it will give more expression
Other than that all is good.
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i start this wall from 2 sketches of mine (really -_-). I scanned them then started to color. It took 10 solid hour.
After that, i did seem to come up with any idea for the wall so i just made it this way
for anyone who watched Shakugan no Shana, you probably know what I mean in this wall :)
That's about all. For those who want to see the original sketches and the non-text version, please contact me
p/s: use this when the you cannot download from AP
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I love what you did in the wall too , the blue flames and whats around the characters looks good :) but the red flame might need more work , the main thing that might need fixing is the line and the diffrent with the character and the size should match with both of them .
overall this wall has a nice concept and the drweing look good ^^ , keep up the good work :) .
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But as has been pointed out (and should be reinforced), the biggest problem is that Yuji and Shana aren't the same size, so instead of looking like a person split in half, it looks kinda clunky. If you could line them up better, and perhaps show their faces in full, this wall would improve 500%
still, it looks pretty cool overall.
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I love the concept and the work you did from the sketch to coloring in, but imho the background doesn't do it justice. I'd definitely suggest trying to improve on it because I think it would look much nicer if the flames were done better.
Another thing; I can appreciate that you're trying to depict their actual height, but I agree with kird that perhaps matching the two sides more symmetrical might look better.
''one world'' on the blue flames...and the othert part on the red side...but still looks good
Thanks for sharing!
Otherwise, I'm really impressed with your coloring. And of course, your sketching skills as well. Heaven knows my sketches look like a furry mothball gone berserk >_> Nice work :)
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I might have to say that the flames need a tad bit of work compared to the character to make them blend in more.
Still you did a wonderful job.
But you should improve on the flames.
I really wish that they have eyes so it will give more expression
Other than that all is good.
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