Hiding in her memories - Anime Paper - Anime and Manga wallpapers and scans! (アニメ)

Hiding in her memories: A Kanon wallpaper.; Also a wallpaper for Kawaii Chibis.; This wallpaper is Under Development, please comment and critique where appropriate.

1600 x 1200px: Bookmarklet; Color theme:

Session Zero

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~erange: Member; Someday, a sunlight will lighten the lost paths~; 1 wallpaper

2 years 3 months ago

Yet ANOTHER version of my"Lost in her memories" wall!
This time, i changed completely the B.G, soo what do you think??!
Link to the other version:
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/comments/item61926/
Please comment on them, and say witch one you prefer, and what to do to improve it! (XD) emoticon

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!barcalover: Banned Member; I don't care about hell people >:/; Comments: 754

2 years 3 months ago

Well,nice idea,umm let me see:
1.Make the girl looks clearer.
2.color the little scans ya posted i think it'll be better after that and make sure for the scans' quality.
3.Make the girl in the middle bigger.
4.use different brushes for the BG.

I wish that will help ya and let me know if ya need more suggestions ^_~
Goodluck!

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~Black-Comet: Member; is interested in making new friends, plus im lonel; Comments: 81

2 years 3 months ago

First off, i don't want you to know that im mean or anything, just speaking my mind ;)

ok, now onto the wall!
the bg is ok, but the scan in the middle is a bit grainy, and make her head a lil' brighter cause it really hard to see her head, cause it all dark.

now, the pics around the border , you have 2 options,

1) you can either get rid of some of them 2) or you can just spread it around a bit because it looks weird if you but them all along the border.

right now your text is nice and pretty so don't change it yet^^

well that's all that needs fixing right now
hope i didn't sound too harsh, and i know its a really long reply, sorry bout that^^;

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~tidez288: Member; Comments: 207

2 years 3 months ago

Erm...sorry to say this, but ain't the characters and line a bit blurry? And the character's a bit too....hard to see? And about those small little pics around the border, might as well rearranged, resize or just reduced the number of the pic (it may be me, but i prefer those to be scattered around and with different size)...it just look quite weird..and there's something about the colour which seems quite out of place....
p/s: everything i said is just my opinion, well, maybe some of my opinion is quite weird(?), hope you won't take revenge on me later~

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