After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
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Hi again! After I read all the comments on the scenic night wall on C.C. I had done previously I admitted that night time was kinda hard for a beginner so I changed it to a sunny morning. I put special effort in smudging the borders and in cleaning the char. Also working with the light and a cute lens effect on the sun. thanks to all of those who commented on the previous one, I'm trying hard to not waste all those nice comments and improving my wally!
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Second Revision: I added grass and a few brids smudged in the bg. Also tried to make the grass look fitting around her.. Plz go on commenting! Thanks for all the advice I got!
Well, at first I have to ask you a question: What do you want to say with your wallpaper?
I just look at it and I think it just looks like a background, a scan put on, some clouds and a lens flare effect. Don't get this wrong but that's how it looks to me. I know it's hard for a newbie to make a wall but if you not change nearly everything in this wall it will not be accepted.
I think you used a vector for C.C. because she looks really clean and crisp to me. The extraction looks ok but needs some work on some edges of the hair. The biggest problem is that C.C. seems to float in the sky because in this vector she is sitting.
That's what brought me to the next problem: The background.
The background doesn't work with the scan. You should use another scan of C.C. or a completly different background. How to do this is what brought me to my question.
The background and the scan depends on what you want to show through your wall. Should C.C. be in front of the sky use another pic of her. Do you want to use this specific vector you need to make another background.
Hmm... Hard to believe that you change the wall from night to afternoon... But it's okay, I like the sky, the sky looks clean, I think you must put the grass for C.C's place to sit... Another people will think that it's impossible that one person can sit in the sky...
How about you put the grass under C.C and make the sky lighter, ^^
I mean... the color (like light blue)... Not contrast or brightness... your contrast is nice, I think you don't need to change that ^^
I think it will be better if the sky looks far away from C.C... I don't mind with the sun, I like the sun ^^, but maybe 2 things that disturb me... Those are a very small circles in the middle of the sky, those are like stars, can you erase them?? We can't see a star in the afternoon...
Good Luck ^^
I hope my comment can help u... ^^
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Maybe a cloud instead of the grass?? that might work too. But I think you need to explain your concept in your brainspill a little bit so others can get it too.
Also you can render the lens flare top on the corner to me it look more like a part of the sun n_n.
Not bad, but a few changes could improve it. Here's some suggestions:
- Continue the grass a bit farther backwards and give it the feeling of a horizon - it kinda looks like she's sitting on the edge of a cliff right now
- Make the sky a gradient instead of just solid blue. If you look outside on a sunny day, you can see that the sky is a lighter color at the horizon and a darker color on top
- Put the lens flare on top of C.C. and the grass, since the flare is caused by the flare of the camera and not by the sun itself.
but maybe the cloud is too low... Can you make it higher?? Coz the sky doesn't look far away... The birds are very nice and look suit with the background ^^ good job ^^
I hope this can help you ^^
Good Luck...
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Second Revision: I added grass and a few brids smudged in the bg. Also tried to make the grass look fitting around her.. Plz go on commenting! Thanks for all the advice I got!
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this won't do, the bg didn't fit at all.
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I just look at it and I think it just looks like a background, a scan put on, some clouds and a lens flare effect. Don't get this wrong but that's how it looks to me. I know it's hard for a newbie to make a wall but if you not change nearly everything in this wall it will not be accepted.
I think you used a vector for C.C. because she looks really clean and crisp to me. The extraction looks ok but needs some work on some edges of the hair. The biggest problem is that C.C. seems to float in the sky because in this vector she is sitting.
That's what brought me to the next problem: The background.
The background doesn't work with the scan. You should use another scan of C.C. or a completly different background. How to do this is what brought me to my question.
The background and the scan depends on what you want to show through your wall. Should C.C. be in front of the sky use another pic of her. Do you want to use this specific vector you need to make another background.
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Hmm... Hard to believe that you change the wall from night to afternoon... But it's okay, I like the sky, the sky looks clean, I think you must put the grass for C.C's place to sit... Another people will think that it's impossible that one person can sit in the sky...
How about you put the grass under C.C and make the sky lighter, ^^
I mean... the color (like light blue)... Not contrast or brightness... your contrast is nice, I think you don't need to change that ^^
I think it will be better if the sky looks far away from C.C... I don't mind with the sun, I like the sun ^^, but maybe 2 things that disturb me... Those are a very small circles in the middle of the sky, those are like stars, can you erase them?? We can't see a star in the afternoon...
Good Luck ^^
I hope my comment can help u... ^^
Also you can render the lens flare top on the corner to me it look more like a part of the sun n_n.
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- Continue the grass a bit farther backwards and give it the feeling of a horizon - it kinda looks like she's sitting on the edge of a cliff right now
- Make the sky a gradient instead of just solid blue. If you look outside on a sunny day, you can see that the sky is a lighter color at the horizon and a darker color on top
- Put the lens flare on top of C.C. and the grass, since the flare is caused by the flare of the camera and not by the sun itself.
Hope this helps!
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but maybe the cloud is too low... Can you make it higher?? Coz the sky doesn't look far away... The birds are very nice and look suit with the background ^^ good job ^^
I hope this can help you ^^
Good Luck...