I rarely comment these days but i felt compelled to share some of my thoughts with you on your wall. it's not going to be all pleasant though...i hope you don't mind. >_< there is potential in the idea behind this, but there are things that can be improved.

the clouds are rather too real and detailed compared to a completely blacked out gundam silhouette. it seems like a rather "quick" way to fit in the gundam, and it causes the lighting to not make full sense. it would have been great if the perimeter of the gundam had been lit up, just as the perimeters of the clouds are, and if the edges on the gundam had been highlighted/darkened accordingly, with various surfaces showing differing dimness etc. doing all that could prove to be quite some work, but how well the lighting is done matters a lot to the unity of elements in a wallpaper. ^^;

the text design and the words themselves are interesting. i would have liked to see the numerous lines not so vertically lined together though. (as in shift some to the right and some to the left more, so the group of text doesn't look like a rectangle) :P

nice effort though. =]