Whoa!
Hey, my friend, this wall is such a great work! (Oh yes, I'm serious)
You've done pretty well the concept, also very carefully chosen colors. Even if this wall is colorful, the colors perfectly match together and evoke real "night Paris feelings"
Well, I would recommend this:
Try to work on the Paris image. I would like to see it more detailed, a bit improved and so on. But, I like it black, with no colors. You have the colors on him, also in the Paris aura, there is no need for coloring the buildings (Oh, I mean the "buildings" in a very respected way)
Then, I had an idea while looking at it. I thought about...Well, since I saw the shirt he's throwing away is not so colored, what about make it in a similar way as the Paris is, then the main thing would be the character with his yellow T-shirt under the "plain" shirt he's actually taking off.
(Hope I wasn't much confusing, you know. Don't use this idea if you don't like it! It was just a tip)
And you should maybe try to fix the extraction a bit, and slight improving of the scan would be also good.
Well, that's all. Hope I could help and good luck!
I personally like the B&W manga feel of the sprite, while the shirt is colored. I love the contrast between the color and B&W, its something I always like. I think this a great wall, Nice work. (also a fan of the city scape BG, as you can see by looking at most of my walls..lol)
Very nice!
the bg's cool, but the transition in color isn't that smooth, the part near the eiffel tower looks cutoff or taken from another image since it suddenly became all black, more details would also be nice
I love the colors you use in the wallpaper and The concept is really nice ^_^
but I think the wallpaper could look better if you can improve a bit the extraction of the scan ^_^
And I agree with lovelylayla near of the eiffel tower the part where suddenly became all black looks a little weird... maybe you can use the horizontal flip at the first part of buildings to made the black part from the left fit's with the black part near of the eiffel tower that way the background could fit's better ^_^
By the way could be nice if you add a few stars in the background ^_^
Good Luck and Hope this comment could be useful ^_^
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But you've got a black line in the background just like you add two pictures and we can see the connection line between them... I mean the black part of the building on the left of the Toure Eiffel... (le petit batiment à gauche de la toure au niveau de la connection photo... Ca fait vraiment bizarre.)
The finger on his pants is surrounded by white you should recolored the white there... It's very small but I love to be picky :)
Speaking about details : the curves of the circle could use some more round effect... The perspective of the movement is wrong (disons que niveau effet cercle qui entoure le personnage, y a moyen de faire plus naturel comme transition...)
And the belt could use some darker tones of the colors you choose.
The gradient background is really a nice touch.
As for the background by the way... You have a light effect problem between the two pictures you use. You have the right part of the background that is really dark. Then suddenly in the middle you get a lighter part and then again softly you go for a darker picture...
For me you should put the Eiffel tower on the left side of the wall to make the background more armanious... Or try to make the right part of your wall a bit less black...
Anyway if you don't get a word I say in english don't hesitate to send me a MP! :)
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a new wall inspired by eclectro music and french nighclub ^^
well I take this air gear scan because i love ikki's face at this moment.
I made the extraction, coloring and the skyline on the gimp
the background and the other thing on illustrator...
comment it please if you think i can improve it ^^
so i hope you like it !
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I like it. but I think the character is too "manga-ish"
wanna try coloring it?
Hey, my friend, this wall is such a great work! (Oh yes, I'm serious)
You've done pretty well the concept, also very carefully chosen colors. Even if this wall is colorful, the colors perfectly match together and evoke real "night Paris feelings"
Well, I would recommend this:
Try to work on the Paris image. I would like to see it more detailed, a bit improved and so on. But, I like it black, with no colors. You have the colors on him, also in the Paris aura, there is no need for coloring the buildings (Oh, I mean the "buildings" in a very respected way
Then, I had an idea while looking at it. I thought about...Well, since I saw the shirt he's throwing away is not so colored, what about make it in a similar way as the Paris is, then the main thing would be the character with his yellow T-shirt under the "plain" shirt he's actually taking off.
(Hope I wasn't much confusing, you know. Don't use this idea if you don't like it! It was just a tip)
And you should maybe try to fix the extraction a bit, and slight improving of the scan would be also good.
Well, that's all. Hope I could help and good luck!
PS: It's really a great wall, believe me.
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the bg's cool, but the transition in color isn't that smooth, the part near the eiffel tower looks cutoff or taken from another image since it suddenly became all black, more details would also be nice
I love the colors you use in the wallpaper and The concept is really nice ^_^
but I think the wallpaper could look better if you can improve a bit the extraction of the scan ^_^
And I agree with lovelylayla near of the eiffel tower the part where suddenly became all black looks a little weird... maybe you can use the horizontal flip at the first part of buildings to made the black part from the left fit's with the black part near of the eiffel tower that way the background could fit's better ^_^
By the way could be nice if you add a few stars in the background ^_^
Good Luck and Hope this comment could be useful ^_^
But you've got a black line in the background just like you add two pictures and we can see the connection line between them... I mean the black part of the building on the left of the Toure Eiffel... (le petit batiment à gauche de la toure au niveau de la connection photo... Ca fait vraiment bizarre.)
The finger on his pants is surrounded by white you should recolored the white there... It's very small but I love to be picky :)
Speaking about details : the curves of the circle could use some more round effect... The perspective of the movement is wrong (disons que niveau effet cercle qui entoure le personnage, y a moyen de faire plus naturel comme transition...)
And the belt could use some darker tones of the colors you choose.
The gradient background is really a nice touch.
As for the background by the way... You have a light effect problem between the two pictures you use. You have the right part of the background that is really dark. Then suddenly in the middle you get a lighter part and then again softly you go for a darker picture...
For me you should put the Eiffel tower on the left side of the wall to make the background more armanious... Or try to make the right part of your wall a bit less black...
Anyway if you don't get a word I say in english don't hesitate to send me a MP! :)
Or not...
:D