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Excaliber Fate Stay Night: A Fate Stay Night wallpaper.; This wallpaper is Under Development, please comment and critique where appropriate.

1280 x 960px: Bookmarklet; Color theme:

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~onisegawa: Member; 0 wallpapers

9 months 1 day ago

This is a wallpaper with servant Fate Stay Night. This is the first wallpaper I've created, hope you all like it.

Dimension 1280x960

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!kyofanatic1: Banned Member; K.O; Comments: 81

9 months 1 day ago

I like the paper but the color of the person needs to be a little darker and he yellow tint around the sword needs to go. The colors in the background and of the character need to match a little better.

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~Loudacryx: Member; <- Small and fragile, yet fast and powerful; Comments: 24

9 months 1 day ago

Artistically speaking, this wallpaper looks really nice. However, here are a few things that might improve it even more IMO:

- Try removing the white glow around Saber, it seems pointless to have it when only a portion of it is visible.
- The patterns around the word 'Excalibur Fate Stay Night' is very artistic, however it looks messy, perhaps using better brushes might solve the prob. Also try to make it look cleaner. The patterns near Saber may need to be redone also, they look plain.
- You could try using a different font for the text that matches the wallpaper.

That is all. This looks like a promising wallpaper, but it still needs some work.

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°august199: Community Waller; I never happen the same way twice; Comments: 893

9 months 17 hours ago

Very nice design, definitely a good wallpaper (great work on making it).
My only advice I can think if is that what you have in the background is sometime much darker than the image of Saber, which I think doesn't look quite right sense Saber is in the foreground. I'd suggest toning the darker elements back and making them lighter. Also perhaps muting the instances of color in the background as well.
Anyway, hope that helped some. Good luck :)

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!TheBlackCatGod: Banned Member; Comments: 40

9 months 16 hours ago

Awesome background! The folks here already suggested everything. I say change the model of saber used with a higher, more detailed saber.

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°Astrologica: Community Waller; Session Zero-er; Comments: 33

9 months 1 hour ago

I think it's ok, but I agree on removing the yellow glow. Also, if you can, try to vector the character. Not terribly detailed, something more like the silouette with some shadows and lights, adapting the colors, to make it look more according to the style of the wall. Personally, I'd suggest you'd leave the sword and the eyes with details, and the rest more just outline+shadows+lights.
Hope I helped. ^^U

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~MrX20XX: Member; Comments: 73

8 months 4 weeks ago

Artsy mixed with serious = awkward. Try a different approach for the feel.

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~naruto-dark: Member; Comments: 141

8 months 3 weeks ago

I liked this wallpaper, but I find that Fate Stay Night clearly combines more with dark colors mixed with a red, but this clean style this very cool

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~Corn-Ellius: Member; Comments: 25

8 months 2 weeks ago

I Love it, try to add more style. Hmm let's try diagonal lines.Anyway for a novice this wallpaper indeed welldone. Keep practicing...

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