Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!
I took out the smaller image of gaara (the one that was further in the background). I also tried to add to the kanji a bit and i relocated it (im not too sure i want to give up the kanji in the image quite yet). I also tried to add somme sand/sand chakra around gaara and around his gourd.
As always, please let me know what you think of the revisions. Thanks.
Hmm, overall I think this wallpaper has a lot of potential, I love the scan you are using and the way you've set up the colors.
My suggestions for improvement would be to take out the two borders at the top and the bottom, the background sand could be made more realistically proportion, make it smaller so it seems as if Gaara is standing IN the desert, not ontop of it. You can try adding a horizon in the background as well, but thats your choice. I would suggest removing the drop shadow from Gaara as well.
The writing on the left is good but make it a little smaller with less red, it would look good that way.
I like the scan and the background, but the kanji that is on the right could be different, perhaps only red without color difference, or without transparency. I don't know, but I know that I don't like the kanji on the right...
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I took out the smaller image of gaara (the one that was further in the background). I also tried to add to the kanji a bit and i relocated it (im not too sure i want to give up the kanji in the image quite yet). I also tried to add somme sand/sand chakra around gaara and around his gourd.
As always, please let me know what you think of the revisions. Thanks.
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My suggestions for improvement would be to take out the two borders at the top and the bottom, the background sand could be made more realistically proportion, make it smaller so it seems as if Gaara is standing IN the desert, not ontop of it. You can try adding a horizon in the background as well, but thats your choice. I would suggest removing the drop shadow from Gaara as well.
The writing on the left is good but make it a little smaller with less red, it would look good that way.
Good job otherwise, keep up the good work =)