Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!
YO again! :3, sot he last paper was rejected so i work a little whit my bectors so i think a made something very good.. after all its Szayel aporro!! *-*, this is my first bleach paper and not the last hoho, so this time i made one whit more color than the others, i hope it will like you!kissus! to my coso sama! :3!!
The first thing that struck me is it's quite 'in your face' (ho-ho-ho). No but I mean seriously, it's quite menacing and up there right in full detail, and for me the sort of repeated random circles around the edges doesn't quite work with that ethos.
It also seems to obscure the bg and make the bg a little hard to work out--what's actually going on back there? It looks kinda funky and pop-art-ish from what I can see, but it's lost a bit for some reason.
I was also struck by how one of the circle sets in the bottom right seems to have white edges but the others don't. Was that to mean something or just for visual interest?
Anyway, I guess the above is, to some extent, personal preference so don't take it the wrong way, and my last comment is very much a personal thing.
I'm not a huge fan of what I call "mono-thickness line style". What that means is that all the lines are exactly the same width. To me, it looks very unrealistic and kinda 'cheap'. If you have a look around at some of the really great vectors, you'll see how they use varying thickness lines to really give something more depth and a greater sense of realism.
It's not a difficult technique to learn and is well worth knowing, even if you generally stick with the single line thickness, as you'll at least have a different technique in your arsenal.
I don't like too much of white color.. and the wallpaper looks too plain (also i don't that character :P).. hope my comment didn't offence ya :S sorry!
Well, I think I really don't like the thin black lines all around and I don't know why they actually are there. What's the reason, because even if they are supposed to be some faces, they are still only black lines more.
I think you need to get the wall in order and lessen the white color. It's too light, I would recommend to make some darker parts there.
:O!! thanks yeaaa in the last time i c all that details! but it was to late :S, thanks to be honest hehe i didnt like it to much .. i dont now why i upload it when it need more work >.<! there's is a option where i can upload the same wall modificated? o.O, and again thank for all the critics the next one i promise it ll better and whit more quality :3!
This is really good for a 1st wallpaper, I like the funky art theme you have - love the abstract art in the background - but the only thing is I think you should've used deeper colours for the vector other than that nice wallpaper
Quite a scary face xD, apart from that I love the brightness of the wall and the fact that someone finally did an espada wall (there are probably others but I haven't thought to look for them ^_^)
Hey,.. I'm dissappointed :(,..
you should have made a bigger size wallpaper... ¬¬
besides from that it's a cool wallapaper.. I liked the way you mixed soft colours here.. (hair)
othhers might think different and have a distint opinion about your wallpaper.(May be good or bad) anyway.. I haven't seen bleach yet,. for so.. I don't know this character.. xD so.. I don't hate him just yet.
Cool wallpaper buddie.. keep it up.,
Later.
Your first wallpaper is really good !!
even if the size is too short you have done a really good job.
i like the style of the background, szayel have a really scary face. it simply a great!
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It also seems to obscure the bg and make the bg a little hard to work out--what's actually going on back there? It looks kinda funky and pop-art-ish from what I can see, but it's lost a bit for some reason.
I was also struck by how one of the circle sets in the bottom right seems to have white edges but the others don't. Was that to mean something or just for visual interest?
Anyway, I guess the above is, to some extent, personal preference so don't take it the wrong way, and my last comment is very much a personal thing.
I'm not a huge fan of what I call "mono-thickness line style". What that means is that all the lines are exactly the same width. To me, it looks very unrealistic and kinda 'cheap'. If you have a look around at some of the really great vectors, you'll see how they use varying thickness lines to really give something more depth and a greater sense of realism.
It's not a difficult technique to learn and is well worth knowing, even if you generally stick with the single line thickness, as you'll at least have a different technique in your arsenal.
Hope that's of some use.
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I think you need to get the wall in order and lessen the white color. It's too light, I would recommend to make some darker parts there.
Hope I wasn't too hard.
Good luck!
i like simple wallpapers. i think that if you make the lines thicker and darker, it would have been better.
nice try!
looks awesome
great job on this one!
I only wish it there was
a bigger size
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Octava Espada kawaii!!
you should have made a bigger size wallpaper... ¬¬
besides from that it's a cool wallapaper.. I liked the way you mixed soft colours here.. (hair)
othhers might think different and have a distint opinion about your wallpaper.(May be good or bad) anyway.. I haven't seen bleach yet,. for so.. I don't know this character.. xD so.. I don't hate him just yet.
Cool wallpaper buddie.. keep it up.,
Later.
it's
simple but it's good
even if the size is too short you have done a really good job.
i like the style of the background, szayel have a really scary face. it simply a great!