Comment on the wallpaper not the character in the wallpaper, please. It isn't going to help the waller much with comments like "Good wall" and "I like this". Be honest with your critiques instead of sugar-coating everything.

Anyways, the scan in this wallpaper could have been extracted better. There are some really rough edges around the scan. This wall looks to me like a cut-and-paste thing, mainly due to the rough extraction. She doesn't seem to fit with the background. The rain effect is overdone that it looks like it's done with a filter in Photoshop. Maybe it is. Since she is standing on the ground and it is raining, it would be better if little ripples or at least something that shows that the rain actually falls to the ground. Unless that's just an effect for the "grunge" look you're going for. But either way, it's still overdone. The text is nice but it contrasts too much with the wallpaper. The whole wallpaper has a tan-brownish color going on and the text is white. I hope the thing around her are fireflies or sparks of light of the sort, but it needs more brightness in the center since fireflies or sparks of light are really bright in the center and the color fades out farther away from the center. You did a pretty good job on this wallpaper. Keep up the good work.