Hi,
Well, this is my first wall so please feel free to comment on my mistakes.
I was watching Shakugan No Shana II and I could get over how innocent Shana looked. So I decided to Vector the screenshot as my first wall.
Number of layers: classified
Time: I don't know
I would like to thank Haruhis2Kyon for all his help, tips and advice.
Nice job on the vectoring, except for the white part in the iris. The bottom left white part in the iris shouldn't have a black outline in it .. and should just be a 'white blob' so to speak.
The text i reckon could be placed elsewhere such as just ontop of the black bar.
Other than that, very nice job.
Heh, finally the wait is over. Congratulations on your first wall, now you're truly an AP member! Ah, yes, I promised an one page comment, which I'm starting to regret...*laughs*. But don't worry, I'm pretty sure I can elaborate every single detail here, or make up some stuff. :D Oh, don't have to thank me, I really didn't do much!
I'm glad you decided to choose Shana for your first wall, heck, this vector mocks my first vector any day. When you told me that you had finished your wall, I was expecting you to use paths for lines, instead you surprised me and created nice smooth and delicate lines with shapes, awesome decision!
The clouds, props to you, seriously. I've no clue on how to paint clouds, which shows that you're a fast learner. Since you've only recently acquired Photo shop, the amount of skills and knowledge you've gained, it's just bizarre, more like amazing, I'm so proud that tears may eventually form, but that's not going to happen, right? x]
The concepts for this wall, though simple, it's still adequate. I'm not sure what Shana has realized yet, maybe that she is stubborn and dense? Or perhaps that she is a fictional Anime character? But I'm pretty sure it has something to do with Yuji, of course.
You've potential, and I can't wait to see more walls from you! ^^
As this is your first wallpaper its very nice..The background is great and the simplicty is awesome.Its a great wallpaper...And the text is also nice!.Great job..Its a fave.Keep up the good work
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a simple and nice wall, mainly of the vector job^^
great vector job, nice for a first timer^^
and the bg is ok and also the colour is ok^^
nice fist-time piece of work/wall^^
good job and keep up the good work
+ fave^^ (i like nicely vectored wall a lot LOL)
It's Nice Wallpaper.
Colors in Shana's Face and the Sky are Calm and Clean. I Think They Express Her Heart Realize Deep and True Sincerity for Yuji.
Her Eyes without Hesitancy and Sorrow are Really Really Bright and Clear. I Think They are no FrameHaze's Eyes. They are a Common Girl's Eyes Filled with Love.
Effects in the Clouds are Soft and Natural. They Make the Scene be More Natural and Romantic. Colors of Shana's Face without Folds and Shadow Stands out.
I Know the Dramatic Scene after This. I Like Her Shouting. "Yuji!! I.... Yuji..."
Thanks for Your Good Work.
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One of the best wallpapers of Shana I have seen so far!very nice colors,textures,graphics,everything is great.Shana look really good on this picture.Nice job!
Gah, I wanted to comment on this so much sooner, but I haven't had the time.
Considering this is your first wall, this is rather well done. I'm not all too familiar with vectoring, so I can't necessarily critique on that part, but I think it looks great! I really like the background as well. I assume that you made it from scratch =P.
As for a few suggestions.. I'd try going with a widescreen version as well. Personally, I like widescreen movies and shows, but I'm not fond of widescreen-style walls. I prefer for them to either be full or actually wide XD. Of course, this is merely a personal suggestion and I don't think it takes away from the wallpaper at all. The second would be the text. It's so very difficult to find good text to match with a wallpaper, especially one like this. I think you did a good job, but I'd consider perhaps providing a textless one as well. XD
I apologize if this comes off as rude, just trying to offer some helpful suggestions. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future =D.
Just like a HD-film capture but...
...Shana is so beautifull... =)))
A simple but good made wallpaper. I only can see the clouds effect and maybe the face contour... but i like it.
Just downloading it. Thank you =))
Nice vector you have done ^^ But I think the top and bottom bars are a little bit too large in size that the wallpaper seems more like a screen shot o.o The eyes should have more variety in colour. Other than that, the colours used are pretty nice, and it's a simple wall which is pleasing to look at~
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Well, this is my first wall so please feel free to comment on my mistakes.
I was watching Shakugan No Shana II and I could get over how innocent Shana looked. So I decided to Vector the screenshot as my first wall.
Number of layers: classified
Time: I don't know
I would like to thank Haruhis2Kyon for all his help, tips and advice.
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Nice job on the vectoring, except for the white part in the iris. The bottom left white part in the iris shouldn't have a black outline in it .. and should just be a 'white blob' so to speak.
The text i reckon could be placed elsewhere such as just ontop of the black bar.
Other than that, very nice job.
Heh, finally the wait is over. Congratulations on your first wall, now you're truly an AP member! Ah, yes, I promised an one page comment, which I'm starting to regret...*laughs*. But don't worry, I'm pretty sure I can elaborate every single detail here, or make up some stuff. :D Oh, don't have to thank me, I really didn't do much!
I'm glad you decided to choose Shana for your first wall, heck, this vector mocks my first vector any day. When you told me that you had finished your wall, I was expecting you to use paths for lines, instead you surprised me and created nice smooth and delicate lines with shapes, awesome decision!
The clouds, props to you, seriously. I've no clue on how to paint clouds, which shows that you're a fast learner. Since you've only recently acquired Photo shop, the amount of skills and knowledge you've gained, it's just bizarre, more like amazing, I'm so proud that tears may eventually form, but that's not going to happen, right? x]
The concepts for this wall, though simple, it's still adequate. I'm not sure what Shana has realized yet, maybe that she is stubborn and dense? Or perhaps that she is a fictional Anime character? But I'm pretty sure it has something to do with Yuji, of course.
You've potential, and I can't wait to see more walls from you! ^^
+Favorite
That distorted thing looked beautiful
On the road I chose as I stumbled, pretending to be strong
The pieces that have come off won’t fill the gaps
like your vector =] i wouldn't use a soft brush for the chin like that ^_^" did oyu paint those clouds O_o nice! needs soe definition but still! x]
nice work on the first wall anyway =]
~Lys
a simple and nice wall, mainly of the vector job^^
great vector job, nice for a first timer^^
and the bg is ok and also the colour is ok^^
nice fist-time piece of work/wall^^
good job and keep up the good work
+ fave^^ (i like nicely vectored wall a lot LOL)
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...Weakness are for those who are STRONG, and strength are for those who are WEAK...
Colors in Shana's Face and the Sky are Calm and Clean. I Think They Express Her Heart Realize Deep and True Sincerity for Yuji.
Her Eyes without Hesitancy and Sorrow are Really Really Bright and Clear. I Think They are no FrameHaze's Eyes. They are a Common Girl's Eyes Filled with Love.
Effects in the Clouds are Soft and Natural. They Make the Scene be More Natural and Romantic. Colors of Shana's Face without Folds and Shadow Stands out.
I Know the Dramatic Scene after This. I Like Her Shouting. "Yuji!! I.... Yuji..."
Thanks for Your Good Work.
Good job. +fav
Considering this is your first wall, this is rather well done. I'm not all too familiar with vectoring, so I can't necessarily critique on that part, but I think it looks great! I really like the background as well. I assume that you made it from scratch =P.
As for a few suggestions.. I'd try going with a widescreen version as well. Personally, I like widescreen movies and shows, but I'm not fond of widescreen-style walls. I prefer for them to either be full or actually wide XD. Of course, this is merely a personal suggestion and I don't think it takes away from the wallpaper at all. The second would be the text. It's so very difficult to find good text to match with a wallpaper, especially one like this. I think you did a good job, but I'd consider perhaps providing a textless one as well. XD
I apologize if this comes off as rude, just trying to offer some helpful suggestions. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future =D.
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...Shana is so beautifull... =)))
A simple but good made wallpaper. I only can see the clouds effect and maybe the face contour... but i like it.
Just downloading it. Thank you =))
Shana looks really cute in this pick!
Good job on your first wall ^^
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Looks breathtaking!
Excellent wallpaper
the face is so cute