After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
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I think the globe in which the reflection of the girl is shown doesn't really work so good.
You have a very soft wallpaper and the globe is very crisp. I suggest to soften the globe so that it blend in better.
The petal over that globe could also be softer. It stands out to much and it's to sharp because all the other petals are very soft and blurred.
The background is a nice add but I also think that it might be a bit to blurred. The bottom of the background looks a bit empty like it is now.
I would suggest to write in the description why the mods rejected that work.
There is always an explanation about the reasons. This might help to give you advice.
I agree with angel-voice, that bubble-like-orb needs some work. It's like a random blotch of black paint compared to the rest of your wallpaper. Use a lighter colour that's more like the background. You should take of that black border around it too, or at least thin it out.
This is just a guess but, you were going for something like those blue bubble-things around the girl when you made that bubble, right? Not that it's a bad thing - it's a great idea - I like it :) But compared to the other bubbles, that thing is huge. Although, if you want to keep it that size, I suggest to make the transition from those small little bubbles to that big one smoother. Make something like a trail of bubbles leading from the smaller ones to the big one. This something-like-a-trail of bubbles should get bigger as it nears that giant bubble. Don't overdo the bubble trail though, it could mess your wallpaper up ^_^' Remember to use lighter colours too ^^
Sorry if I don't make sense -_-
Oh, and I also suggest on putting a title. Your wallpaper is bit empty on the right side.
I can't find and 'edit' button for my other post, but I'd also like to add that I recommend the bubble trail, regardless of whether you want to resize that larger bubble. Making the bubbles bigger as it nears wherever they're going towards is your choice.
The wallpaper looks awesome.... the way you made the background of the wallpaper with the same style of the scan is really nice ^_^ but the globe in the right corner looks out of place..... i think the wallpaper could look better without it.... and try to use other font for your signature because the font you use don't look so good.....
Good Luck and hope this comment could be useful ^_^
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Here are my suggestions.
The bubble on the low right is irrelevant and I think you should fill the empty space with bubbles that fit the environment.
I think you should also enhance the lighting a bit.
You did a decent expansion of the scan but on the right side there aren't as many details as on the left side. You should probably balance the two sides.
Here's what I mean:
I got a bit carried away. I don't mind if you keep what I did to the wall. I just wanted to make a point here.
Good luck.
Anna/Fire
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I think the globe in which the reflection of the girl is shown doesn't really work so good.
You have a very soft wallpaper and the globe is very crisp. I suggest to soften the globe so that it blend in better.
The petal over that globe could also be softer. It stands out to much and it's to sharp because all the other petals are very soft and blurred.
The background is a nice add but I also think that it might be a bit to blurred. The bottom of the background looks a bit empty like it is now.
I would suggest to write in the description why the mods rejected that work.
There is always an explanation about the reasons. This might help to give you advice.
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I agree with angel-voice, that bubble-like-orb needs some work. It's like a random blotch of black paint compared to the rest of your wallpaper. Use a lighter colour that's more like the background. You should take of that black border around it too, or at least thin it out.
This is just a guess but, you were going for something like those blue bubble-things around the girl when you made that bubble, right? Not that it's a bad thing - it's a great idea - I like it :) But compared to the other bubbles, that thing is huge. Although, if you want to keep it that size, I suggest to make the transition from those small little bubbles to that big one smoother. Make something like a trail of bubbles leading from the smaller ones to the big one. This something-like-a-trail of bubbles should get bigger as it nears that giant bubble. Don't overdo the bubble trail though, it could mess your wallpaper up ^_^' Remember to use lighter colours too ^^
Sorry if I don't make sense -_-
Oh, and I also suggest on putting a title. Your wallpaper is bit empty on the right side.
Good Luck and hope this comment could be useful ^_^
The bubble on the low right is irrelevant and I think you should fill the empty space with bubbles that fit the environment.
I think you should also enhance the lighting a bit.
You did a decent expansion of the scan but on the right side there aren't as many details as on the left side. You should probably balance the two sides.
Here's what I mean:
I got a bit carried away. I don't mind if you keep what I did to the wall. I just wanted to make a point here.
Good luck.
Anna/Fire