So, yea. I technically finished this wall like a month ago, but people in SZ told me to vector it, so I did... after trying to learn how to vector for a couple of weeks. Either way, this thing took me way too long cause I suck at vectoring anyway. I think I spent about 16 hours on the vector <_< *yea, I suck*
Moving on, I hate kyoani eyes, so much... well, I think I hate anime eyes in general, simply because I haven't found an efficient way of vectoring them <_<
Oh yea, at the white splotch on the rainbow part... Yea. I like it, don't wanna remove it ^^
Yes, I know that the entire lil glowy thing from the D-string (assuming it's a proper violin, which, judging by her hand positioning on both the violin neck and the bow, may not be true) is in front of the violin. Yes, I tried to put it behind it for part of it, so it would be like going around it, but it looked terrible.
And yes, I know, considering her fingering, it should be something like A flat or G or something around there. But I care not ^^
Either way, thanks for wasting your time looking at my own personal time-sucker-upper (I'm barely doing homework these days :P)
It's beautiful for lack of better words I like the paint spots and color choice, your vectoring job is supurb and the violin is amazingly done, great detail great background great wallpaper it's going on my desktop right now keep up the good work A+ and a fav
Oh hahah, i remember that episode when they all held this violin concert just for her. XD it was funny!
anyways, i love the way how you fixed up the violin, it is really nice. then the notes...very nicely done, i love it! keep up the good work!
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Wow i saw this on sessions, it looked good then, and hope it turned out similar, that it did, i like have you left much of the same,and just took out some worldly gestures. i think its a magnificent pic of Kotomi playing the Violin she loves to play but is not good at..., but it symbolizes her, thats what i think.
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One reason to get this wall, (well aside from the cool concept, though I prefer a change of BG color, or make her a little shiny since this is Kotomi's "moment") IT'S A KOTOMI-CHAN WALL!
We need more Kotomi-chan! And a chisai Kotomi-chan wall too!
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Oh, I remember this wall but it suddenly disappeared from my grasp a month ago, and now it has returned with an awesome vector of Kotomi. I have to admit, well done on the vector work, it's decent and as you have said, very time consuming. I love the simplicity of the whole wall, especially the lines and the fading effect but I have mix feelings regarding the splatters. Overall, it's nice, clean and a kick-ass wall -- love the concept. ^^
Loving the simplicity, though the vectored coloured lines could be a little more fancy. Other than that this is done pretty well ;p!, though the background is a bit too empty, maybe a few more swirly lines would make the wall look even better!
Alright, you submitted it! It looks great to me. I really love the overall concept. You pulled it off quite well. And I think I like the texted version better ^^ Anyways, this is a fave from me!
P.S. Your KyoAni eyes looks fine to me ;) (I love vectoring KyoAni eyes XD)
Lol..kewl wallpaper, though it'll be better if you use shape outlines than stroke.....but I love teh composition and idea lolz...nice brush, too..xD...so +fav
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Hm... here's a little what I think-
As suggested it would turn out a whole lot better had you not used path stroking... The lines can also be made less thick with the shape outlines method. I personally also don't like the random splatting around, probably because of her face expression, the wallpaper has a serious melancholy feel, and the splat kinda kills it.
I agree that the splats kind of throw off the picture. It kind of adds this imbalance to the picture and kind of takes away from the simplicity.
The only other thing i would say is that the space in the upper left is kind of odd. Some splatters there would make the splatters on the right side seem more than just ranomd spots.
Other than that it is a nice wallpaper. Though it is odd how the violin comes out of her trachea but I guess the scan can't be helped.
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I really love this!! I think you did a great job with the vector and I love the effect of the rainbow and music notes, even the paint splatter. It all works so well with Kotomi and her violin playing. I'm definitely saving this one!
It's Nice Wallpaper.
Violine and the Heroine are Interesting Combination in This Wallpaper. She is Playing Music with Cool Face. It's Ironic.
I always Remind Lonely Starring StringFellow Hawke When I See Characters Playing a String Alone.
I Saw Its Original Scan. It You Included the Audience in the Scene, It Would be Very Funny and Comic.
Dim Colors in the Background are Calm and Silent. I Think They Make the Music She is Playing be a Little Vacant.
Arts and Colors in Curved Lines and Musical Notes are Graceful and Delicate. I Like Your Sence about Them.
Thanks for Your Good Work.
The vector is kinda awesome, just that the violin is a little bit out of shape (violins have sharper edges). And I think the rainbow and musical notes are too solid, music is supposed to be more flowing and simple ^^ That was me speaking as a musician.
On the other hand, if I view it with a normal eye, this wall is beautiful enough ^^ I don't mind about the splotches in particular, but I don't quite agree with the bar at the bottom - it disrupts the whole feeling, especially at the dress part.
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So, yea. I technically finished this wall like a month ago, but people in SZ told me to vector it, so I did... after trying to learn how to vector for a couple of weeks. Either way, this thing took me way too long cause I suck at vectoring anyway. I think I spent about 16 hours on the vector <_< *yea, I suck*
scan:
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/scans/Clannad/item162290/
brushes:
http://the-rails.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Notes-brush-pack-60345847
http://ka05.deviantart.com/art/Splatter-Brushes-31656209
Moving on, I hate kyoani eyes, so much... well, I think I hate anime eyes in general, simply because I haven't found an efficient way of vectoring them <_<
Oh yea, at the white splotch on the rainbow part... Yea. I like it, don't wanna remove it ^^
And apparently, I like the textless version better than the texted version. So yea, you can find that: http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/RubyKirby/Virtuoso/ (along with all the other versions I've ever made.)
Yes, I know that the entire lil glowy thing from the D-string (assuming it's a proper violin, which, judging by her hand positioning on both the violin neck and the bow, may not be true) is in front of the violin. Yes, I tried to put it behind it for part of it, so it would be like going around it, but it looked terrible.
And yes, I know, considering her fingering, it should be something like A flat or G or something around there. But I care not ^^
Either way, thanks for wasting your time looking at my own personal time-sucker-upper (I'm barely doing homework these days :P)
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anyways, i love the way how you fixed up the violin, it is really nice. then the notes...very nicely done, i love it! keep up the good work!
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We need more Kotomi-chan! And a chisai Kotomi-chan wall too!
That distorted thing looked beautiful
On the road I chose as I stumbled, pretending to be strong
The pieces that have come off won’t fill the gaps
and i really like the colour choice!
P.S. Your KyoAni eyes looks fine to me ;) (I love vectoring KyoAni eyes XD)
"It's agonizing not being able to like the things you like."
Great design
nice vector
I just love it
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~*...Love is in the Air...*~
As suggested it would turn out a whole lot better had you not used path stroking... The lines can also be made less thick with the shape outlines method. I personally also don't like the random splatting around, probably because of her face expression, the wallpaper has a serious melancholy feel, and the splat kinda kills it.
But it's a decent wallie.
The only other thing i would say is that the space in the upper left is kind of odd. Some splatters there would make the splatters on the right side seem more than just ranomd spots.
Other than that it is a nice wallpaper. Though it is odd how the violin comes out of her trachea but I guess the scan can't be helped.
[insert generic praise as seen above]
Through me you enter into the city of woes
Through me you enter into eternal pain,
Through me you enter the population of loss.
Abandon all hope, ye who enter here.
~Dante's Inferno
Hail nothing full of nothing, nothing is with thee.~Ernest Hemingway
Violine and the Heroine are Interesting Combination in This Wallpaper. She is Playing Music with Cool Face. It's Ironic.
I always Remind Lonely Starring StringFellow Hawke When I See Characters Playing a String Alone.
I Saw Its Original Scan. It You Included the Audience in the Scene, It Would be Very Funny and Comic.
Dim Colors in the Background are Calm and Silent. I Think They Make the Music She is Playing be a Little Vacant.
Arts and Colors in Curved Lines and Musical Notes are Graceful and Delicate. I Like Your Sence about Them.
Thanks for Your Good Work.
On the other hand, if I view it with a normal eye, this wall is beautiful enough ^^ I don't mind about the splotches in particular, but I don't quite agree with the bar at the bottom - it disrupts the whole feeling, especially at the dress part.
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