This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.
While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.
The images you used in a lot of this scan aren't proportionally scaled and they look really squished together.
Some things to help this wall along...
- If you're going to keep the original manga quality, then at least make it look more textured so it can blend better... rather than it looking like a scan was just slapped on.
- The writing on the bottom corner of your main center image should be edited... I'm always mehmehmeh about work that has premade logos/signatures/text on it...
- The blur on the film strip holes contradict the rough quality of all your images in general... so a solution to that could be A) Cleaning up the manga images to be more smooth and solid maybe with a similar blur to the film strip holes, or B) rough up the filmstrip to make it blend better with the quality of your images.
- The image you have in the bottom left corner needs to be cleaned up a bit. Its quality/texture alone is completely different from the other manga scans you have selected and you need to either fix that one up a bit, make it stand out more, or something else... The sword is cropped off.. so finish that sword off or blend it better into the wall
- Lastly, because of the texture of the bottom left image, the words you added on top makes that whole area seem to busy. Maybe make the words stand out more with a drop shadow or outer glow or stroke or even different colors... who knows.
Hokay~ hope all these comments are of some help to you, I look forward to seeing your progress
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While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.
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this wallpaper have allen and lavi in it and they were fighting in the manga
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The images you used in a lot of this scan aren't proportionally scaled and they look really squished together.
Some things to help this wall along...
- If you're going to keep the original manga quality, then at least make it look more textured so it can blend better... rather than it looking like a scan was just slapped on.
- The writing on the bottom corner of your main center image should be edited... I'm always mehmehmeh about work that has premade logos/signatures/text on it...
- The blur on the film strip holes contradict the rough quality of all your images in general... so a solution to that could be A) Cleaning up the manga images to be more smooth and solid maybe with a similar blur to the film strip holes, or B) rough up the filmstrip to make it blend better with the quality of your images.
- The image you have in the bottom left corner needs to be cleaned up a bit. Its quality/texture alone is completely different from the other manga scans you have selected and you need to either fix that one up a bit, make it stand out more, or something else... The sword is cropped off.. so finish that sword off or blend it better into the wall
- Lastly, because of the texture of the bottom left image, the words you added on top makes that whole area seem to busy. Maybe make the words stand out more with a drop shadow or outer glow or stroke or even different colors... who knows.
Hokay~ hope all these comments are of some help to you, I look forward to seeing your progress
good luck...