Hey kai! you better go to sleep too before you turn in to a vampire yourself, LOL. its must very late there now. before going see my reply in the "searching" topic
The depicted character (Ayasaki Hayate) is taken out of that one episode where he is forced to cross dress. Out of the perverseness of my nature, I made a love bed and ignominiously threw Hayate on top as the threatening shadow of some ill-intent individual looms over him. Hayate, sensing potential trouble, protests with "datte, boku wa...", which roughly translates to "but, I am...[a boy]."
Since I've only quite recently acquired Photoshop, I've had quite a bit of difficulty in making this wall - the worst of it being those darn pillows.
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So I fixed the shadow in the background, and tried to make Hayate a bit "warmer." Also, I shrunk the words down a bit and gave them a slight tilt so they aren't so obtrusive/irritating. But aside from that, I personally can't spot more problems (aside from the questionable nature of this situation), so I would appreciate it if someone else can tell me where else I can improve.
LOL! wo! Another Hayate no Gotoku wall! xD!!
lololol! Nice work on the wall lol although i must agree, the eyes do look rather strange lol xD!
Hehe~ But i like it lol! xD funny imagining Hayate in that situation saying those words lol! xD
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I was wondering how long it would take before somebody used poor Hayate in his cross-dressed state. Heehee! Very cute ^_^ Scary and a bit disturbing with the shadow thing, but still cute. Awesome job.
Sooo, here's my take on what you can do to improve :3 It's a lovely wall, I love the idea. XDD
But, I think you could make the text a bit more panicked - like, with exclamation points and such. Also, you might want to differentiate the floor from the bed a little more in terms of color... I didnt realize it was a bed right off till I read the description, but then again I also looked at it for about a second o-o
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The depicted character (Ayasaki Hayate) is taken out of that one episode where he is forced to cross dress. Out of the perverseness of my nature, I made a love bed and ignominiously threw Hayate on top as the threatening shadow of some ill-intent individual looms over him. Hayate, sensing potential trouble, protests with "datte, boku wa...", which roughly translates to "but, I am...[a boy]."
Since I've only quite recently acquired Photoshop, I've had quite a bit of difficulty in making this wall - the worst of it being those darn pillows.
Edit:
So I fixed the shadow in the background, and tried to make Hayate a bit "warmer." Also, I shrunk the words down a bit and gave them a slight tilt so they aren't so obtrusive/irritating. But aside from that, I personally can't spot more problems (aside from the questionable nature of this situation), so I would appreciate it if someone else can tell me where else I can improve.
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Funny theme in frrrriighten scene.
Cool job and i like it ^_^
lololol! Nice work on the wall lol although i must agree, the eyes do look rather strange lol xD!
Hehe~ But i like it lol! xD funny imagining Hayate in that situation saying those words lol! xD
keep up teh goodwork!!
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Great work for your first wall! Looking forward to future walls from you.
Why HEH-LOH there!
Oh.. Did i mention that I CLAIMED HARUHI?? hahaha ^_^
Step right up and claim your girl!
Who's the shadow though?
chrono-akia has claimed Rokudo Mukuro!
But, I think you could make the text a bit more panicked - like, with exclamation points and such. Also, you might want to differentiate the floor from the bed a little more in terms of color... I didnt realize it was a bed right off till I read the description, but then again I also looked at it for about a second o-o
Hope this helps a little! ^^;