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Sunday !! (1st wallpaper) *plz comment: A The Melancholy Of Haruhi Suzumiya wallpaper.; This wallpaper is Under Development, please comment and critique where appropriate.

1600 x 1200px: This wallpaper was last updated 1 year 6 months ago (2nd revision); Bookmarklet; Color theme:

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~viragoprincess: Member; Dreamer; 2 wallpapers

1 year 6 months ago

Hi there everybody,
I'm Viragoprincess & I'm new to making wallpapers.
This is my first wallpaper.I hope you'll like my wallpaper 8)E emoticon

,I hope it meets with the site standards and I'm not violating any rules. (o_o) emoticon

I'll give a short description,
This is a 'Melancholy of Haruhi suzumiya' wallpaper.Well, I've used a lot of floral patterns in the background.I wanted to make it look energetic yet peaceful , so I ended up with up with this. |(VcV)| emoticon

I really need comments as to what is wrong in the wallpaper or what needs to be corrected as this is my first wallie.So please help .(n_n). emoticon

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~liraooa: Member; Comments: 186

1 year 6 months ago

You do know about color lol, the colors are nice, but the BG(background) is really simple, you put the color and the brushes on top of it, that's not going to be accepted, the mods are going to tell you that it lacks of effort. try to be more creative with the BG.

then the scan, it looks really blurred, and grainy, vector it, and once you do the vector, make the scan a loot bigger, and make the wall a looot bigger too, try use the biggest resolution you can do, that way the wall would be awesome, try 2560 x 1600 or 1600 x 1200 once you do all that submit it here in SZ to get more comments about what else you can do, good luck.

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~Marlin000: Member; Pokemon Trainer; Comments: 59

1 year 6 months ago

I'm not sure if the mods will accept this one because of the low amount of effort put into it, but if it wasn't so pixelated and had a greater area I'd download this one. I like simple wallpapers that keep to a specific theme. I think it's an excellent start.

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`leviatan: Senior Member; Boku no atarashii sekai...; Comments: 1256

1 year 6 months ago

To be your first wallpaper is not bad ^^
i would recommend you to play more with the flower brushes^^, i think you should remove the shadows from the red flower brushes cause distorts the whole wallpaper and gives different sense of perspective.
Some of the flower brushes are very pixelated, also the character looks pixelated.
i think the blue color just doesnt seems to fit.
+i will give you a tip ^^
Sometimes the whole wallpaper colors are extracted from the main character (sometimes i do that hehe^^).
well i hope this helps you^^
Good luck!

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~jsmm: Member; Comments: 79

1 year 6 months ago

Bad quality

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!airi-masaki: Banned Member; Comments: 245

1 year 6 months ago

It's very cute!!
Good job!!

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~dejiko12: Member; Nothing is impossible; Comments: 333

1 year 6 months ago

I like the concept, but i can see that the image extraction is not quite good. I can see that it is pixelated; you should clean it up. Also the brushes are a little pixelated. You have to fix that and i think it would be available to send to gallery.
Good luck!

Dejiko12.................................^_^

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