Wow, looks awesome for your first try! She's very pretty! And I like the dragons, too! Emerald color gives her a mystical appearance. Very nice! :)

This is just like "Cold Rage" in the fact that the wallpaper is essentially two colors. The focal point is clearly the girl, which is fine, but she is all the more ruined by the fact that, since the wallpaper is very bland color-wise, other things in the wallpaper, like the moon and the dragons only blend into the character and not compliment her by detailing the background, thus adding a confusing function to your focal point, causing it to become less attractive. The problem is that since they mesh the scene that is trying to be depicted is ruined on the bases that everything becomes one free flowing object that is placed on a rather bland background instead of one well defined focal point place into a scene that helps compliment her complexion, and thus advance the quality of the wallpaper. You should not fear color, because the lack of it has now ruined two consecutive wallpapers. I'll give you more credit on this one, since you added, or attempted to add, more into the background scenery and therefore tried to draw more emotion from the viewer, but all the meshing of the black and white only ruins this attempt. "Cold Rage" was extremely bland and insipid thanks to it's lack of anything except the character and it's lack of color. This is now bland and insipid because of just it's lack of color. I'll credit you for moving one step forward, but point out that you need to move one more. Could have been a lot better in the end, and essentially the on word that describes the wallpaper is: "potential" as in this had the potential to be decent, but is not.

Simplistic yet not, how do you explain how cool this is ;p. the blends of those whites/blues you got going there is awesome

Very nice wallpaper ..
The colore is very well for this wall ...





Good work ...

I'm so happy I saw this OAA wallpaper, Selenna-san ^.^ The part I love the most is the hair - it looks so detailed and beautiful, and you certainly have a distinct style in vectoring which makes you stand out among other wallers. The only minor problem with the hair is that you might make it longer and change the shape a little so that it doesn't seem that she's using some sort of hair gel, and the shape of the mouth is a little weird too ^_^ I appreciate the hair clip and earring, they add a nice touch to the hair, but they might work nicer if they are more shiny and detailed. Still, it works all right as it is now =) Also, I love the dragons, and I think you did a great job vectoring them. The lines and petals you added behind them also gives a nice feeling of movement. Great use of the bamboo and stars brushes too~ However, the moon, window (some wood grain will be nice) and wall lack details when compared to the rest of the wallpaper, otherwise this wallpaper will look better than it already is ;)

Personally, I think you did the best you could choosing the colors to put into this wallpaper. The colors are soothing and pleasant to look at. I don't think that it's 'bland' either *glares at a particular comment* because it suits the mood, scene and composition of this particular wallpaper. Also, I'm sure your future wallpapers with color, if you do make any, will look as good as this one~

I love you >_< I mean, your wallpapers xD +faves

I really like the dragons!they are really small and unique(cause most dragon i see is big...really big)
one think can be improve is the expression of the girl,i think it can be better cause it don't really make fell live at all(this is what i think...not sure of the others)
well overall i think you are really good!!u can do better^^

I can say just wow. maybe it has tons of miss in drawing but for first time it unbelievablly good)
hey i have a tiny ask for you can you explain how you draw a hair it really interesting for me)))