This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.
While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.
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That's an improvment of my wall.
I worked the Bg (more light). I have other versions (the colour of the flowers: yellow and red). Do you think that flowers are good like that? I can submit the other versions if you want to see.
Thanks for your pieces of advice, it really help me!
Cilou
This looks great to me, I can't say that I can see anything that needs to be improved or changed. Great work! I suppose you could use some kind of effects with it, like making it glossy, adding a little wind to the help the snow, etc. I don't know how those would work, but the style does seem to point in that general direction. Wonderful job so far, keep it up and this will be really exceptional. Kudos to you!
Looks better after you modified,but I do think it might be better if you change the color of the flowers,because blue flowers are not that distinct against blue sky,I think pink or yellowish white may be better,and as I said last time,the outline of the moon is not neat enough
I'm glad to see that you've removed the curtains. However I think you could change the colours because the overall tone is a bit flat. Try adding ore shadows, light areas, and a variation in colours altogether. For example, not all of the flowers on the tree have to be the same colour, those closer to the top may be brighter, and the background can gain more tones with a texture or a cloudy render filter. The only thing with shadows so far here is Yuuko.
Also, the sprinkle of yellow dots really bothers me. They look bright, distracting and too excessive on this wall. You could try to reduce the number of them, but I would personally remove them altogether.
The orange moon also looks a bit artifical. You could try to find a better set of colours (and perhaps, if possible, not a gradient) colour for it. A crescent object with a linear gradient makes it look artificial and a bit out of place.
I'm looking forward to seeing the finished version! Don't keep me waiting. x3
To me, the snow... fireflies... petals, what not, look a bit like dandruff on Yuko. Especially because it only ever shows up on the black parts of her.
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That's an improvment of my wall.
I worked the Bg (more light). I have other versions (the colour of the flowers: yellow and red). Do you think that flowers are good like that? I can submit the other versions if you want to see.
Thanks for your pieces of advice, it really help me!
Cilou
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maybe move yuko up a bit, and cut the size into widescreen
Also, texture would probably make the wall look nicer!
Also, the sprinkle of yellow dots really bothers me. They look bright, distracting and too excessive on this wall. You could try to reduce the number of them, but I would personally remove them altogether.
The orange moon also looks a bit artifical. You could try to find a better set of colours (and perhaps, if possible, not a gradient) colour for it. A crescent object with a linear gradient makes it look artificial and a bit out of place.
I'm looking forward to seeing the finished version! Don't keep me waiting. x3