After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
Oh boy, lets hope i can remember what i wanted to say.
the stroke lines are quite jagged, crispy and... not very neat-looking at all.
The composition of the three Hitsus its ok, but very hard to relate to the background. that is, they dont blend in nicely with it.
personally i dont like the effect on the text, 'cuz it's hard to take in at first glance (al least for me)
My first reaction was: Isn't one shot more then enough to do with?
Well anyway the lines between the shots aren't done very nicely at all,
Somehow I don't think the bg matches the wallpaper also so mutch but I have no idea why...
I do like the effect of the text thought cause I feel it somehow does match Toushirou
But look also at the different quality from the 3 shots, it's better to use 1 and the same quality for everything in it, good luck with improving
This wall is well done, but it seems meaningless, I don't understand where you are coming from or your purpose of making it, and you spelled his name wrong, it toshiro, not taishou. some places are missing the outline example: the front shiros arms.
Excellent idea. Like others said, the character need to be cleaned up (get rid of the white border around each of them, and improve the picture quality on each of them). After that I think you could somehow make it seem like the two background images are fake, and the closest one is real (like a time-lapse thing, where the other two are after-images). To do this, you could simply make them a little transparent and add some filters to give it that look. Mess around with that and see what you like. This should bring a lot of unity to the wallpaper, I think (or at least give it more purpose).
Also you could mess around with lighting a lot more. Make the visible sky a bit darker and make the moon glow more. This should give a lot dimension to it if you add the appropriate shadows and whatnot.
This is a VERY cool idea for a wallpaper, good luck with it.
Hiya! At first glance I like how all of the colors seem to go well with each other. I like the 3 figures of hitsugaya, but the first two (especially the foremost one) are too fuzzy. Even though the colors match well, I don't see how the lightning and moon relates to hitsugaya. (or maybe I didn't watch enough of the anime, up to you to decide.) Also, I would have to agree with one of the above guys that the text effects do make it hard to take in the words at first glance. Overall keep trying, this is a good w.i.p.!
I like the idea you have and the style effects on the text. Please just spell the poor guy’s name right.
The feeling I get is that you are trying to show how he draws his sword and moves into a battle-ready position with the three pictures. If that is co, I really like the idea, but I think you need to make the two back images more like “after-images” like Poey said. If you can maybe do an effect on the images that is similar of has a similar feel to them like those on the text, it might be quite cool. You also need to improve the quality of the images.
You writed the main problem already in the title - triple. Why? He has two brothers which looks like him or what? On a good wall one character is just once! Also the first pic seems to have lower quality.
Well try to remove the white lines from toshiro and the third image in the right side looks
blurry try to clean up the image a little not too much or it would look too blurry and the text
looks a little unclear and it makes it difficult to read it and try to write a little more description
so we can help you.
It's a brilliant works. Just like toshirou is in motion! With the flash and the silver moon together, it can more emphasize the charater.
But there are two points, first, the fornts of kanji should be changed, that fonts is not suitable in this case, this font is too formal, it should be used a more active font.
Second, try to make more vector on the most front toshirou!
Anyway, go did a great job!
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the stroke lines are quite jagged, crispy and... not very neat-looking at all.
The composition of the three Hitsus its ok, but very hard to relate to the background. that is, they dont blend in nicely with it.
personally i dont like the effect on the text, 'cuz it's hard to take in at first glance (al least for me)
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Well anyway the lines between the shots aren't done very nicely at all,
Somehow I don't think the bg matches the wallpaper also so mutch but I have no idea why...
I do like the effect of the text thought cause I feel it somehow does match Toushirou
But look also at the different quality from the 3 shots, it's better to use 1 and the same quality for everything in it, good luck with improving
Also you could mess around with lighting a lot more. Make the visible sky a bit darker and make the moon glow more. This should give a lot dimension to it if you add the appropriate shadows and whatnot.
This is a VERY cool idea for a wallpaper, good luck with it.
hhmm... the 3 pictures are drawn differently, try to vector them all so that they all look the same :)
The feeling I get is that you are trying to show how he draws his sword and moves into a battle-ready position with the three pictures. If that is co, I really like the idea, but I think you need to make the two back images more like “after-images” like Poey said. If you can maybe do an effect on the images that is similar of has a similar feel to them like those on the text, it might be quite cool. You also need to improve the quality of the images.
Good luck.
blurry try to clean up the image a little not too much or it would look too blurry and the text
looks a little unclear and it makes it difficult to read it and try to write a little more description
so we can help you.
you can do it better next time we know you can.
But there are two points, first, the fornts of kanji should be changed, that fonts is not suitable in this case, this font is too formal, it should be used a more active font.
Second, try to make more vector on the most front toshirou!
Anyway, go did a great job!