After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
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This is my second wallpaper about Final Fantasy 13. I work on Stella before, now i use Vanille for the wallpaper's main character. I want to made a wallpaper which includes Snow, Stella and Lightning but after created Vanille's back part, decided that only Vanille must be on it :P I am still curious about the left part because it isn't seen good in my opinion, but if i delete the brushes on there; it becomes worse too O.o
The last thing i did is adding pattern, it removed the endless blackness :P
Hope you like it.
Messy, I can't even tell what/where the focal is.
Text is alright I suppose.
Just clean it up and make a focal.
Also that copy of the girl and the opacity change just doesn't look good.
I agree aboyt the opacity changed shadow, mainly because it looks like most of her head is missing.
What I do like:
The background texture, the color of the light behind her, especially the "plant/flower" brush, and the one below her that looks like a flower. The scan quality is nice, and I like the light tendrils on the left, but the don't seem to fit in with everything else.
Now, is some of what's going on behind her a fractal? I'm not crazy about how the edge of the lower stroke breaks into pixels, especially since one of those pixels is randomly in the space between her and the text.
Something else that nagged me about this is for some reason the wall feels empty to me. And do something about the text, please. That font and effect just don't look right. I'd suggest trying to change is, or maybe change where it is on the wall, or perhaps leave it out altogether.
I agree, it is a bit messy. Vanille is very small (and the double image of her is distracting; it only works as a reflection in water). If she were bigger, it would help the wall have some focus. Also, what's she standing on? The floating looks a little off.
The pattern on the BG doesn't really fit the image, but I do like the flowery brushes and that eaten away part to the bottom left of her. I think if you found a bigger scan of her and used the brushes a little more tactfully, you could really be on to something. Get rid of the stuff on the left and focus on Vanille and the stuff near her, not on filling up the wall with random stuff.
Remove the line illustration and text in the left side
make the bg plain black
and contrast/sharpen the character more
if it could, make the character bigger than this one
I'm always a fan of taking the focal point of the wallpaper and sticking it to the right side since most desktops have all their icons stacked on the left. It's a very pretty wallpaper, but I think the layout could use a little work. The layout doesn't seem to flow very well considering the sum of all the pieces.
The background is nice and the wallpaper isnt baD BUT YOU SHOULD PUT MORE WORK IN IT ,9
The font you use doesnt suits and it doesnt look nice either what youve done with the text and there is a rex pixel near the text.
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The last thing i did is adding pattern, it removed the endless blackness :P
Hope you like it.
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Text is alright I suppose.
Just clean it up and make a focal.
Also that copy of the girl and the opacity change just doesn't look good.
What I do like:
The background texture, the color of the light behind her, especially the "plant/flower" brush, and the one below her that looks like a flower. The scan quality is nice, and I like the light tendrils on the left, but the don't seem to fit in with everything else.
Now, is some of what's going on behind her a fractal? I'm not crazy about how the edge of the lower stroke breaks into pixels, especially since one of those pixels is randomly in the space between her and the text.
Something else that nagged me about this is for some reason the wall feels empty to me. And do something about the text, please. That font and effect just don't look right. I'd suggest trying to change is, or maybe change where it is on the wall, or perhaps leave it out altogether.
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The pattern on the BG doesn't really fit the image, but I do like the flowery brushes and that eaten away part to the bottom left of her. I think if you found a bigger scan of her and used the brushes a little more tactfully, you could really be on to something. Get rid of the stuff on the left and focus on Vanille and the stuff near her, not on filling up the wall with random stuff.
The color scheme is great though! Good luck!
make the bg plain black
and contrast/sharpen the character more
if it could, make the character bigger than this one
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The font you use doesnt suits and it doesnt look nice either what youve done with the text and there is a rex pixel near the text.