After months of work, chanelqueen17 has created a gorgeous scene of Alice and Oz from Pandora Hearts, using scans that didn't even feature both characters together. Even after spending so much time on matching the details of the characters to their new looks, chanelqueen17 didn't stop there and went all out on the background too! This wallpaper definitely needs to be seen!
This is my first wallpaper on here.
I hope some of you like it.
I colored this scan myself and loved how it turned out so I decided to make it into a wallpaper.
I know its pretty simple but I still think it turned out pretty nicely.
Please comment ^^
I would love to hear some suggestions on how I could be better.
Hmm...the texture you used made the wallpaper seem to be low quality, and the jagged lines do not really help either. I suggest that you remove the texture if possible and try to clean up the lines either by filters or vectoring them..
Also, add more details to Soubi's hair, because there's a great deal of white parts which look kinda strange.
Cannot full view your wallpaper, so I will just comment from what I see from the thumbnail.
It is good that the light of the gradient somehow pointing to their lips, as they are going to kiss in about a moment xD I think it is better if you use some texture or some custom brushes on the background to add some variations in the background; creating a more romantic atmosphere maybe?
And for the font, I do think the effect (soft light?) you use here kind of makes it unclear. I think it will be better if you make the texts clearly seen, and then choose a good font for that. (the one you are currently using is good, but it won't hurt to look for some other fonts right?)
Oh, and what is that black thingy on the bottom left of the wallpaper? clothes or something? I think it is better to remove it, or make the wallpaper a bit bigger to the bottom, so people can notice it better.
I think this is all I can say for now as I can only look from the thumbnail.
It's very nice, i like it, just take out the text i feel that don't need it, or try to use another fx on it not like a transparency. ohh please don't forget the widescreen format, best regards
Hmm the scan lines are too crisp and jagged; outlining it with the pen tool would do miracles. (: The coloring also seems "lined"... or was that on purpose? ^^; Anyway, I like the overall design and simplicity of this.
I personally like the text how it is. Actually I like the whole wallpaper how it is. I don't think it needs any brush work done on the background. It's simplicity is what makes it look so good.
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I hope some of you like it.
I colored this scan myself and loved how it turned out so I decided to make it into a wallpaper.
I know its pretty simple but I still think it turned out pretty nicely.
Please comment ^^
I would love to hear some suggestions on how I could be better.
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Also, add more details to Soubi's hair, because there's a great deal of white parts which look kinda strange.
That's all I think...good luck =D
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It is good that the light of the gradient somehow pointing to their lips, as they are going to kiss in about a moment xD I think it is better if you use some texture or some custom brushes on the background to add some variations in the background; creating a more romantic atmosphere maybe?
And for the font, I do think the effect (soft light?) you use here kind of makes it unclear. I think it will be better if you make the texts clearly seen, and then choose a good font for that. (the one you are currently using is good, but it won't hurt to look for some other fonts right?)
Oh, and what is that black thingy on the bottom left of the wallpaper? clothes or something? I think it is better to remove it, or make the wallpaper a bit bigger to the bottom, so people can notice it better.
I think this is all I can say for now as I can only look from the thumbnail.
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I personally like the text how it is. Actually I like the whole wallpaper how it is. I don't think it needs any brush work done on the background. It's simplicity is what makes it look so good.
Great job (: