I like so much the sky, for some weird reason...well, maybe some people think is to dark, but with the scene and the scan, you can understand why, i like those bright spots [i really should think in a cooler way to call them] and the text [Can you tell me the name of the font that you use for "Rozen Maiden"?]. The only thing that maybe look odd are those black feathers, maybe if you leave just plain feathers instead of detailed ones, the result could be better.