Wow, your uploaded to SZ wallpaper. Nice!

Personally, I like the text one. I love the text and how it is more balanced. Yet, the 'helios' on the wing is a bit off set.

As for the main one you have. The balance is off a bit. I do like the 'ball' thingy of Helios's but with the name over the wing it just dosen't go. In all actuallity.. you may not need either of them. You've done plenty of work with 'Helios' and his wings. Perhaps, a little more blending to the background. Maybe some textures would be nice. Desktop">http://www.desktopanime.com/blog.php?blogTag=tutorial]Desktop Anime Tutorials They do have textures but i can't find them at the moment. I can upload you some if you want. Or just go to Google and Google out 'Textures' .. Should give you some great ones.

Um, I kinda got off track... Sorry about that. But that's mainly my thoughts. You can take um or leave um. I know its not easy to wall. I've fought many a battle with everyone and myself. So, I hope you get this finished and into the gallery. I know you can do it!

::Angel-sama::

Wow, I love the background but now your background is so great. Helios kinda seems low grade. I seen he's 'jacket' was cut off over on the left which isn't going to do. You can try and cover it up with some 'clouds' or 'cloud brushs'. But he's just seems a bit low grade unless you can blur out some of the 'patches' that show up. They aren't bad but are ment to be blurred together. If you don't want to do that. I found your same image in the gallery and if your willing to download and extract again. Then it may pay off even more for you.



I know its a lot of work and I know I may seem nit picky but I'm not. I know I've been pushed to the limited and still 'booed' for my efforts. So, please don't feel that way. I love your wallpapers in any stage that you show me but I know you can make a fantasic wallpaper. I see it developing right before my eyes. *^^*heh

::Angel-sama::

Thank you for your comment, Leticiacosmos! That's a pretty name too.

In my earilest versions of this wall, (way before AP), I did have Helios on the side because of that robe problem. But I've asked around & someone is kindly doing a vector of him because most of the comments I've gotten have told me that this extraction isn't upto AP standards. Those wings are the reason I'm leaving him in the middle.

Plus, I think you and several other people are right that I need to add some clouds or something in front of Heilos. And most people seem to prefer the colored background too.

Thank you again for taking the time to give me your feedback!

Best Wishes,
Dove

This wall has not been forgotten.

It will be finished and it will be wonderful!!
::Angel::