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which side are you?: A Kingdom Hearts wallpaper.; This wallpaper is Under Development, please comment and critique where appropriate.

1152 x 864px: This wallpaper was last updated 11 months 1 week ago (2nd revision); Bookmarklet; Color theme:

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~gamerz92: Member; i start a conversation with a question; 0 wallpapers

11 months 2 weeks ago

i change a few things ... but i keep sora and riku ... (XD) emoticon

i add roxas between dark and light ... because he is a twilight type ... meaning he is neither light or dark ... ( []-[])9 emoticon

in other word twilight colour is orange like the sunset or sunrise in twilight town ... its a wonderful sunset ... <3 emoticon

i also add oblivion and oathkeeper because they represent keyblade of dark and light ... another example is soul eater and kingdom key ... i wanted to add those keyblade(sora's and riku's) but theres not enough room for it ... (._.); emoticon

so ... what do you think? (o_o) emoticon

is it good enough to join the others in the gallery? (o_o) emoticon

i doubt it ... (XD) emoticon

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~Tech: Member; There Are NO Stupid Questions, Just Stupid People; Comments: 71

11 months 2 weeks ago

Remove the Texts

your signature should be small(12) and below the main wall and the middle image remove the embos. also the crown

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~jigoku-nin: Member; maki maki!; Comments: 115

11 months 2 weeks ago

The BG seems so vibrant in my eyes.
Maybe you can alter the colors.
~good luck!

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~GameXtra: Member; Comments: 21

11 months 2 weeks ago

The real picture look awful! its too blury and you can't see a thing in it...
king miki(:33333) the invincible miki became invisible, how thats happend?
Goofy shield became a a thing(Yea a thing) and I just can't look at it, its hurt my eyes...
and Donald Duck weapon is just stuck in all of it cuz the color looks awful together...
Roxes suddenly had another hand who seems to "take a look" at his nose...(xD)(that probably just because of the quality of the picture but i just ROFL from it).
the color of the background don't fit for the picture and not for black and white...
the logo just don't fit in that frame well, and the background hurt my eyes...

GameXtra

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~nova-kun: Member; Analytical Perfectionist & Critic; Comments: 152

11 months 2 weeks ago

For me, the mix of grayscale and colour really isn't working for me, especially around sora and kairi where the parts which are grayscale and those which are coloured aren't properly defined. The glow around the weapons isn't really helping. I strongly suggest you move the KH logo behind the all the chars. And either get rid of the crown or blend it in properly. The "King" Mickey idea is so bad it isn't even funny. And work on the background a lot more.

Side note, if I'm not wrong, this scan should be pretty high-res so increase the resolution coz 1024x768 really doesn't cut it these days.

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~aaapa12: Member; K.O Designs; Comments: 162

11 months 2 weeks ago

Okay so I'm going to seem a bit harsh but it's all for your own good.

1. Remove the text. You have to much of it scattered all over the wall. It makes people's eyes hurt and tacks away the attetion. Plus the style and colors just doesn't fit. Also you signatures should be smaller and off to the side somewhere, not big and in the middle.

2. The colors don't match. If you are going to use grey scale and blue take oout the gold. The colors just don't mix well and gives it an aweful glow.

3.Don't mix images. If you are going to use the Image in the middle from Kingdom Hearts 2 than take out the images in the background from Kingdom Hearts 1. It also doesn't mix well and you can proabably find those guys in their kingdom Hearts 2 clothing to make it fit better.

5. Remove the crown. It's right over mickey's head and you can barely see him as it is.

6. Your images (all) are very jaged on the edges. Try extracting it better, maybe useing a mask layer. Or use the lasso tool with feather set to one or two.

7. Try useing some darker colors. These as it is now is a little to bright and you can barely see some things.

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~naruto-dark: Member; Comments: 207

11 months 1 week ago

Everything was perfect in this wallpaper, only found that it lacked a thing, to place color in the personages, because the remaining portion this perfect one, congratulations

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~haikoru-sama: Member; A next wallpaper? Why yes!; Comments: 222

11 months 4 days ago

Bg & Colors don't match. Text is also ugly. you must keep on improving this.

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`yukina-rei: Senior Member; My Bonkers Daddy Just Sold Me for $ 100; Comments: 1001

11 months 4 days ago

Make the colors in the background blend together more. Fix the text too, it's too distracting and the font doesn't really suit the mood of the wallpaper...It will be good if you can move the guy on the right higher so that all the characters in the wall are of the same height and level. The ghosted images/duplicates behind them should be removed too...

As for the composition, you need to fix the balance of the wallpaper. Make sure that the guy in the centre, i.e. Sora is in dead centre, and the ones on the left and right should not be too near the centre. The placement of the text should be the same too. From what I see of the thumbnail, the extraction of the characters, especially the guy on the left is not done well enough. Redo it and make sure the jagged lines and colors are not there.

On a positive note, I like the colors, especially those in twilight ^^ And I will be pleased to see this in the gallery~ Good luck ;)

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~haikoru-sama: Member; A next wallpaper? Why yes!; Comments: 222

11 months 14 hours ago

I can't edit my post >_<
The word's arrangement is do not want. No joking.

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~jigoku-nin: Member; maki maki!; Comments: 115

10 months 3 weeks ago

I see you've completely changed it.
For me your previous character scans look better than the current one.
Why don't you try using those instead? Your BG is quite good but still it can get any better rather than using a single pattern BG. Good luck Hafi-kun!

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`kuryuki: Senior Member; //lurking in the shadows...; Comments: 1588

8 months 2 weeks ago

Wrong resolution
the text is weird
the effects you used on blending is pretty nice
the shadow(?) behind the 2 charas on the side is unneccesary
and you should probably move the right one up a little

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