This wall look realy mysterious, with this blue light.
the alchemist circle look cool.
Ed also look very nice.
I think it's a very good wallpaper.

I can't really comment on the technical aspects of the wall too much but I'll provide some hopefully helpful criticism.

What I like: I think that you picked a good scan that lends itself well to a wall, and the coloring and the lighting effects are done well. Also you said that you recreated the transmutation circle but had to modify it, well good job, it looks very faithful to the style and design that is used in the series. I also like the fact that there are some areas of block color, that seem to me like you are recognizing the fact that this will be on people's desktop, so there needs to be some space for icons that won't clutter up the wall or make it hard to find the icons. Maybe it was just a stylistic decision, but either way good job.

What I didn't like: The soft lines used for the lighting on the circle behind Ed are in too great of a contrast with the crisp lines used for Ed himself. The transparent circle overlapped over Ed helps to tie the two together a little bit, but it still feels a little bit like you made a Full Metal Alchemist background and you made Ed, and there isn't much to make them fit together with one another. I feel like there could be any other character instead of Ed and behind Ed there could be any other background behind Ed and it wouldn't be any worse than how it is now. Maybe having another thing in the wall that is defined with crisp lines would help, I guess I am not really sure myself how to remedy this. Another small thing I can comment on is that formally, it makes sense, but is not quite as interesting as if it could be if there was something else to balance out the weight of the subject a little. Or maybe he could be at a different angle that causes the viewers eye to flow back into the action. As it sits now, the directionality of the wall seems to be straight out Ed's pointing arm.

I want to state again, that I really like the wall and I am only offering the criticism because I appreciate when I get honest comments (that hopefully help in some way). Great coloring, lighting effects and creation of the transmutation circle. I look forward to seeing more of your walls in the future.

I LIKE ED SO MUCH, THAT I DOWNLOAD ANY WALLPAPER OF HIM . UNLESS HE LOOKS GREAT IN THEM.YOURS LOOK ALL SOME.

Saving it. i adore the lighting. the circle looks very nice. i like the contrast it has compared to ed in the background

Edward who comes to the Nena formation that shines to a dark background and the
light is shape.

I lov this wall. Thanks

+fav

Nice finally one worthy of downloading. keep it up the colors of course are my favorite. i like the efect around the hand as well. i just like this one is smooth. keep it up

Nice one, that's a good image of edward elric to put on a wallpaper, the background is good and blends well with the character, really nice lighting effects on the alchemy sign on the bottom, nice work