I totally re-did this wall. I found a better scan of Kiba (and hopefully the extraction i did was alright). I re-worked the background and tinkered with the "photos."
Hopefully, this is a better wall than the previous one.
Well, I like the background in this one, very nice concept and it looks very good.
The main problem here is the Kiba scan. He's not blending with the background.
What can you do to fix that? Well you can play with his colors until you can see that his colors match the ones from the background, or you can also use some brushes over him to make it seem he's inside the background and not just on top.
Also I can see some bad extraction, on the outline of his hair, there's a part in which you can see some kind of lump o.o you'll want to fix that and make it look all smooth. Also over his right leg, I can see some white background over the outline, so again, you may want to smooth that out.
I don't want the BG, but it's constructed.
The colours of the photos don't match with the BG and Kiba.
The tracks of the dog is a good idea in my opinion.
I hope help you.
Good luck!
Well for me the poses pattern looks, on the first look, like flowers... And it's not fitting so well with Kiba! lol
The color theme is a little too blue for my taste. The character doesn't really blend with it even if it's the same color as his outfit.
The pictures in the background don't really look like photos... The quality of those is a little too low and you don't have any reflection of the light like on glossy pictures or some tired parts or any details that could explain that those are pretty old pictures...
You have 3 Konoha's leaves in the picture... Isn't that a little too much? lol
For the text, I kind of like it but I would rather see something more Naruto's font like... If you see what I mean...
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2 months 15 hours ago
Oh well,as everyone said i think Kiba doesn't match with the background's colors.
And erm.. the tracks of the dog isn't good addition on my piont of view ^^"
The idea of adding the pictures is good and i like it :D ,But if you changed the bg's colors would be better.Try to blend the colors with Kiba and the pictures.
As Tyson said,The extraction needs a little work.
Overall,your work is really good and i wish you a goodluck! ^_^
Character
-The image of Kiba has fairly low quality with white lines where the extraction needs to
be altered, also maybe get an image Of kiba with Akamaru for your main image
Concept
-The Photo's are a good Idea but maybe add a slight shearing tool bend on each of the photo's
and add some shading overlaying the underlyig photo's from the one on top if that maes sense
background
-The background is very similar to your Flame wall,
that's okay but may be seen as repitition of that color hues and text but that should be fine
the only suggestion I could make would be maybe a scene shot, maybe in the forest
sorry for my perhaps over critical analysis of this wall but a great start
Good luck