- Onegai Twins
- A Onegai Twins wallpaper.
- This wallpaper is Under Development, please comment and critique where appropriate.
© 2008
~norinori
- 1280 x 1024px
- Color theme:
Session Zero
User Comments!
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2 months 2 weeks ago
Hmm, I like the two on the wall, but your wall needs a little improvement.
First, the extraction needs more work - some lines look too thin, some too thick and choppy and some look weird (the color on the hair tips).
Try using some filters to refresh the characters a bit; they still look a bit grainy. There are some tutorials about that on the net.
Those Japanese letters in the bottom aren't really necessary; they don't really match up with the overall conception of the wall. Try adding your own words using some nice, soft font.
And last, the background color is fitting but the wall looks a bit too plain - try adding some brushes or textures.
Wish you luck with your wall! :)
First, the extraction needs more work - some lines look too thin, some too thick and choppy and some look weird (the color on the hair tips).
Try using some filters to refresh the characters a bit; they still look a bit grainy. There are some tutorials about that on the net.
Those Japanese letters in the bottom aren't really necessary; they don't really match up with the overall conception of the wall. Try adding your own words using some nice, soft font.
And last, the background color is fitting but the wall looks a bit too plain - try adding some brushes or textures.
Wish you luck with your wall! :)
2 months 2 weeks ago
First of all, you need to place a sig in the wall as stated in the FAQ. Then, the outlines of the two girls there are too jaggy =/ showing clumsy extraction. Besides, I think that the background is too plain, add some designs (brushes) and/or textures, but don't overdo it. And the Japanese logo on bottom is not really necessary - it takes away the beauty this wallpaper might have o_o
Anyway, it looks like an interesting scan. Good luck ;)
Anyway, it looks like an interesting scan. Good luck ;)
2 months 2 weeks ago
It's very cute!!
Good Job!!
Good Job!!
2 months 2 weeks ago
fyeFirst of all, you need to place a sig in the wall as stated in the FAQ.
I would argue the contrary. Despite what the FAQ says, an artist should not be required to watermark his/her wallpaper, but if you do make sure it's both small and in a corner. A watermark that is too big will only battle with your image for supremacy, which will ruin the wallpaper. Also, if you can remove the look that the characters were direct ports over from the scan used to make this wall, then I'd say the wall would be ready to come out of session zero. The character location and logo placement is perfect, as is the simple background. you see wallpapers are not meant to be something that has a million things explode onto the screen at once, just something simple and sweet to look at.
2 months 1 week ago
I love onegai twins
1 month 1 week ago
Vi esta serie y quede desepcionado la verdad es q prefiero onegai techer pero hablando en si de tu wall paper como q le falta un poco de mas esfuerzo un saludo a todosss 

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