I'd have to say, this wall really isn't one of my favorites, although I love anything Bleach related. It's just so... simple. I almost thought it just was a screenshot from the show itself since its been so long since I saw these scenes. But maybe that's a good thing, for me to have to actually be like "ok, whoa, that's not exactly as is from the show."

I think it's too basic... but it was a basic concept, and it did show that well. Yachiru's bloody childhood before meeting Kenpachi. The editing is great, obviously... blends beautifuly. I think it could have been a little more detailed, but that probably would have ruined the whole concept. So maybe it's just the concept... I don't know. Either way, it was edited beautifuly. Wonderful job on that.

The girl looks so flat, moreso than the rest of the wall, which is also rather flat.
And the blood effects are a bit.. ehhhh. Seems like they could have been done better. It is hard to imagine how the blood could get in the position it is in under the sword. If it came off the sword because of the rain it wouldn't have spread out so evenly because of the grass.
Just my opinions..