Rofl...
trousers...hehe...he said trousers...i laugh...
yeah well oh yeah i forgot...ummm chica when i posted i forgot to like put a disclaimer on it...
ya see this isn't really "mine" i mean it was in my posession and therefore was "mine" but not like that...
DISCLAIMER: the last one shot with INUXSHIMA was NOT i repeat NOT"mine"!!

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Hun i can't even read it...it repulses me...
DBZ?!?!?!?!?!?!
what in goddess's name were you thinking??
sorry but you said brutally honest...*huggles poor broken spirited boy*

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*sniff* sorry that is all i can thank about but i read it over and it was really bad so i need to redo it but i will change evrythig if it is that bad

There are you happy i deleted the story i will just have to think of a new one from scratch

Oh my goddess! you deleated it!! you weren't supposed to do that! oh dear what if Kat comes and tries to eat me in my sleep for this?*slowly turns to chu wit a glare*
..........................i blame u..........................................

oh well ...jsut think hardand i'll be waiting for your storie...but remember what topic it goes under this time kk hun??
if it has anything to do with yaoi or sex or both...then you put it here...if not...put it under origninal stories or story...ithink that's what its called...

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So i'm a hungry monster now?!
i didn't get to read your story kakashi T.T

Well are you mad at me for like not stopping him from his story deleting rampage??
cause if you are then yes you are a hungry monster...
and that's another reason that he shouldn't have deletedit!!
love you guys tho...^_~

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Sry i didnt know it was that important plus it sucked on ice because it had nothing in it to do with what oneshot i put it in the wrong section. i needed to put it under the story thing because it wasnt a sex scene or a yaoi...so srry again dont eat me

Awwww Kat hunny, pweas don't eat my boyfriend...i'm slightly attached to the guy ya know...hehe ^_~
so wass up?? Kat or kakashi?? cause neither of chu is on and its very boring...i was getting ready to like start to type to myself but i decied against it...

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Ahhh, I read the first story and it was really interesting... I liked it. ^^
The second one is pretty...I can't find the right word for it, lol. Still, a fun read! =D
You have a mind for writing stuff, lol. I can never write like that. O_o

Well that's the point of this group^^
it's to help everyone write the best story they can^^
even if its sucks on ice, we're here to help you make it better^^

Ohhh okay

“When are we going to get there?” whined Tyson,

“Shut up” said Kai enforcing it by elbowing him in the stomach. Their train thundered through the English countryside as the moonlight spilled through the windows.

Kai had received an e-mail from someone claiming to be Rei’s brother. At first he had dismissed it but decided to take the team to England to check it out, just in case.

Rei himself was excited when he first heard the news but now on the train he was tired and grumpy as ‘coincidently’ Mariah was going to the same town on the same train. She had been pestering him the whole journey trying to chat him up and tried to kiss him any time they went through a tunnel.

Finally she decided to go to the toilet and Rei took the opportunity to sneak away and sit next to Kai.

“How’s Max doing?” not actually wanting to know but wanting to talk to someone other than Mariah.

“Still sleeping” Kai murmured, “I can’t believe he managed order so much beer on the ferry”

Rei groaned as he saw the bathroom door open and Mariah walking back towards him.

“We are now approaching the station,” said the announcer over the tannoy.

As the train sped round a corner time seemed to slow down. There was a sound of metal twisting and breaking. The carriages started tipping. Bags were falling out of the luggage racks, sparks flew from the bottom of the train which was now one of the walls where even though the train had left the track it still kept moving, over head the lights flickered and went out leaving the passengers in almost total darkness except for the moonlight casting a dull glow through the now shattered windows. Glass and dust covered everything. There were screams and shouts from all the carriages.

People from the station could see everything that was happening but only one threw off his jumper, jumped off the platform and sprinted toward the train. He could see smoke coming from some of the carriages so he took to piece of cloth from his pocket and as he ran tied it round his mouth.

Back in the carriage Kai was scrambling around on the now horizontal wall. He was amazed he had got through it practically untouched the others were not so lucky. Tyson had shards of glass embedded down his left arm but he could still walk. Max who had woken while falling through the air off the seat he was lying on to the wall, had a gash from his forehead down his cheek to his chin where blood trickled down his face and neck. Tyson had propped him up on his lap trying to keep him awake because he still had his hangover. Both of them were trapped between a fire and about ten cables, hanging from the wall above them, still carrying a powerful electric current.

Outside the train the person had reached the first carriage and punched a ceiling hatch open and looked in there were only two people there both were unconscious but not bleeding he picked one up at a time in a fireman’s lift and left them outside the carriage for the emergency services to deal with when they arrived.

He moved onto the next carriage, it was in a lot worse shape than the first one. He punched open one of the ceiling hatches but was blown back but the flames that licked through the hole. His tanned skin was blackened by the ash and smoke. He looked for another way in. Eventually he found a handhold and pulled himself onto the top of the overturned carriage and dropped through a window he could see a lot more people in here. There were three businessmen digging themselves out from the rubble, there were two boys trapped behind hanging power cables and a blue haired boy trying to lift debris off someone. Seeing all of this he decided it was best to help the ones who could get out faster. He grabbed a Beyblade out of his pocket clipped it in the launcher and send it flying slicing through the cables then ricocheted off the wall back into his hand.

“Go! Now!” he ordered them half shouting. They understood and clambered out through the windows cutting their hands on shards of metal and glass but they didn’t care because they were safe for now.

After putting the blade back in his pocket he rushed toward bluenette but a metal bar from the luggage rack broke and slammed into his right shoulder.

Kai heard the snap of bone but the stranger still propped himself up wincing in pain and crawled over him. Kai looked at him he seemed strangely familiar. He could tell the stranger was a neko-jin because of his glowing golden eyes but he had a headband on showing the yin-yang symbol identical to Rei’s.

Kai snapped back to reality and to the pile of metal and glass he was shifting

“Rei can you hear me?” Kai yelled trying to hold back a tear. Rei was the only Bladebreaker he really got on with as Tyson had the manners and hygiene of a pig and Max was constantly hyper or drunk. Rei was more mature than the others and actually understood him but now he was buried under a pile of rubble in a train where a fire was quickly spreading.

The two of them worked together clearing the pile until they saw the limp figure of Rei not moving and covered with cuts and bruises. The stranger checked his pulse.

“His hearts beating but he’s not breathing,” he stated which brought Kai some hope. The stranger then checked down Rei’s throat before starting mouth to mouth. After a few breaths Rei jolted upright panting. Blood trickled from the corner of his mouth. The stranger brushed the dust out his black bangs before grabbing Rei’s arm over his shoulder and lifting him up. Kai grabbed his other arm and they lifted him out the carriage where two of the businessmen he saw earlier were trying to resuscitate their friend. As the two boys carried a semi-conscious Rei down the gravel track back to the station Kai asked, “What’s your name?”

“Yamato Kon but just call me Matt, Are you Kai?”

“Yes and this is Rei, your brother”

Yamato’s knees gave way and Kai took the whole of Rei’s weight. Kai had only just noticed the massive red stain on the back of Yamato’s white T-shirt that was growing with increasing speed.

“Help, I need some help over here!” Kai yelled towards a paramedic who after seeing the collapsed boy called his friend and ran over with a stretcher.

Meanwhile in the carriage a small pink haired girl lay injured after she had fallen through a window on her way back from the toilet. Her fingers twitched and she coughed up a mouthful of blood. As she came round she thought of the boy she loved ‘He wouldn’t forget me, he couldn’t’ she thought, “This is Kai’s fault he’s the only thing keeping him from me, I have to make it right’.

Hunny that was alot better than the DBZ one but i have a feeling i know this anime too...*drifts into thought*

Well i'd better start reading^^