well?

what about this one?


[NEW]

or

I love them...

Both have too much commotion. I know that for the first your trying to capture all the different overdrives in one wall, but it ends up being a massive assault on the eyes. I'd focus on one at a time. Make a series for them. Try different concepts for each wall, yet keep to a similar theme that you have going on.

The second one is a bit more confusing. I understand the concept of explaining which side do they chose, but a similar thing seem to happen as well. The text is near impossible to read at the bottom.

I apologize if I seemed a bit rude, but those were things that stood out to me.

You mean ... its a bad idea to combine all of it into one wall?

I think they look great

Yeah.

Mainly with the overdrive one, nothing fits well together. I think it's a cool idea, but the colors make it seem as if four separate items were just put together. I'd say, since each overdrive is different, do a certain one for a whole wall. Just focus on that, though I would also try to branch out from the black background with lightning effects as well. It's not a bad idea, but I'd browse around online for some tutorials. Maybe something more along the lines of an abstract design?

The second one seems to suffer from a similar problem as to where it seems as if separate walls were combined into one. Though, you might still be able to work with the faded images of Riku and Sora. It's just my two cents. I think you've got some good ideas, but I'd just rework them.

*jotting down
abstract ...
and rework ...

thx everyone

anyone else want to critique ...
come on ...
the more the merrier ...

I like both, but I think the second one looks better.

Really?
i tought the first one is better

any suggestion to make it look better?