My 1st wallpaper

~fullmetal21

Wed, 19 Apr 2006 19:14:54 -0400

Heheh, accepted ;P, thank you everyone for your advice (PS, sorry for bumping this now useless thread. Im just so happy my 1st wall was accepted heheh)

~CaptnIgnit

Tue, 18 Apr 2006 13:01:41 -0400

Yep it is a big improvement, I would work a little more on the eyes. They are the biggest impact of the picture and can make or break a wall IMHO.

take a look at that for reference. I believe it is around the same timeframe. notice how the rims of the eyes have a shadow/gradient type effect. Plus the little highlight of the shine in the eye has a big impact. but you will have to play with where to place it.

anyways, I always spend hours playing around with that stuff=0P

`chibicrystal

Tue, 18 Apr 2006 10:48:34 -0400

I don't know, it's looks pretty good as is. you can always try making the eyes better, it can't hurt. i like the new text, i think it fits good. i would say try and submit, you can only lose 100 papers ;)

~fullmetal21

Tue, 18 Apr 2006 10:44:07 -0400

Wow... thanks alot O.O, I didnt think people would be using it until I submitted it, hehe. But Yeah, I really wanna keep the black... stuff I have now, and I actually tried the dark seal brushes earlier, it didnt work. And I thought I had fixed the eyes, maybe ill redo them... again :P

~chidoguan

Tue, 18 Apr 2006 10:37:02 -0400

I think the background would look better if you make some cursed seal shapes instead of the black ones that you have (not that I dont like the original background!) I also think that you need to retouch the sharingan :p after all whats left of sasuke without the coolest eyes ever?other than that I liked a lot your wall and Im currently using it ^^

Keep up the good work

~shaboobalaboopy

Tue, 18 Apr 2006 01:57:11 -0400

Hey that looks mucho better than your first ones

θblu3angl

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 22:36:12 -0400

^^ much better~
C:

~eclair-lumiere13

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 22:31:42 -0400

I think it is really cool! It has a unique style that I have never seen before. I think it reflects Sasuke's real attitude in my opinion. He doesn't seem like the cold, evil, sarcastic type that hates all humanity. Too me he is vidrant, alive and sarcastic person that hates a certain someone and finds Naruto annoying. Sasuke hides all of his emmotions behind a wall and the result is cold Sasuke (although the sarcasm managed to come out). You can tell he is more vidrant than he lets on when he is fighting. His moves are very energetic and agressive. I can't say that i'm an expert on how it actually looks though because I am unable to make good pictures. But I think it's really cool! Keep it up!! ;-)

~fullmetal21

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 22:11:12 -0400

Ok, heres yet another version. I "fixed: the eyes (thx CpnIgnit for the idea), changed the text, added my signature, and brushed the bg a little, hopefully to add a little depth.

~Yulaw

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 20:14:36 -0400

Hmm your trying that kind of art style wich has been pretty popular these days. its quite ok, but I'd suggest changing the font and try to change the characters colors near the bg colors, it may look weird but spectacular as well, just experiment a bit. Goodluck!

~CaptnIgnit

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 19:29:26 -0400

I would find a close up shot of sasuke with his sharingan at that point. Use that for reference and clean up his eyes.

You are making good progress, the vector is coming along nicely.

θblu3angl

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 19:07:28 -0400

Yep much better^^
a few things though,
his eye is kinda unclear at some places, like the white part,
also his bandages look like they were wet
C: good progress~

~Inuspal

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 19:04:43 -0400

Well it's definatly looking good so far ^_^
I think it actually looks better without the lines on his face =O
his eyes are a bit funky, but it's nothing big
The vectoring is starting to look really good =^_^=
And yes that is what I meant by the text it looks nicer now =)
btw - I'm a girl XD

`Almighty-Baka

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 19:01:27 -0400

You definitely need to finish the character vector.. it looks incomplete as is, and there is a big quality difference between him and the background. Just start from scratch and use the original image as a reference.. you'll learn a lot in the process and improve tremendously, I guarantee it. As for the BG, the bottom black bar has to go.. you probably placed it there since the original image was cut off, but its really distracting and certaintly out of place. You did do a nice job of portraying rage, though, I can definitely feel the ANGER. x)

~fullmetal21

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 19:00:27 -0400

Alright, heres try #2, with the face cleaned up and such. Any better at all? If not, then I know what the problem is and I can fix it, but itll take me forever. T-T Plus I changed the text to how Inuspal suggested (at least thats what I thought he was saying)

~Inuspal

Mon, 17 Apr 2006 18:35:56 -0400

Yes I think you should still vector it T.T
If it looks bad, then post it anyway and we'll probably be able to help you out
Good luck~!