Jo from Bakuten (Ugetu Scan)

°Limality

Sat, 28 May 2005 05:08:23 -0400

the Wip19 link doesn't work. but 18 looks fab there Lima.
The edge of the ridge seems a little blurry.. never saw transparant rocks in rl .. ;)

:3 i thinhk its the light that overflows which makes it look transparent :3

okay wip19
and wip20
are uploaded now XD basically i don't have a clue what i did from wip18-wip19 but i did change the fonts from wip19-wip20 and also added some sunrays :3 with some neat easy tricks :D okay maybe its too bright now for some folks but hey? if you look into the sun its too bright too right? and i added more particles flying around her...after all it IS an ANGEL'S LANDING so why not make it a bit mystical :3 so i added a "shadow" to the particles looking at the sun to make em get illuminated by the sunrays of course..i also tried it for the birds but maybe ill revert that again...doesnt look too good.

well then matane and come up with opinions :D

$Taurec

Sat, 28 May 2005 05:00:47 -0400

The Wip19 link doesn't work. but 18 looks fab there Lima.
The edge of the ridge seems a little blurry.. never saw transparant rocks in rl .. ;)

°Limality

Fri, 27 May 2005 19:40:48 -0400

okay okay I just think it would look cool...geez

oh sorry if it came over as a ...erm rant? XD didnt mean it that way
neways: wip18

Update:
wip19 changed the text and took the some birds away and gave them a darker color and less blur. also i added the kanji for Bakuretsu Tenshi in the typography and set the opacity of the glow of the kanji for angel's landing a bit down and made it look more like an outline. im not sure but im already pretty satisfied...maybe im just lazy too XD

`2kool4u

Fri, 27 May 2005 18:11:32 -0400

Okay okay I just think it would look cool...geez

°Limality

Fri, 27 May 2005 17:36:33 -0400

I think the text should go somewhere else...I like her pose and the text right in front of her is a bit annoying. Oh and about the cityscape, I think it would look really cool...just think of it...her pose standing at the corner of a tall building...and in the backdrop the glowing moon shrowded in the clouds...whatever I think it would look really cool.

rofl i dropped that idea again and no moon >_> weve seen enough of them

neways gonna finish this thing netime soon...getting exhausted

`2kool4u

Fri, 27 May 2005 17:00:01 -0400

I think the text should go somewhere else...I like her pose and the text right in front of her is a bit annoying. Oh and about the cityscape, I think it would look really cool...just think of it...her pose standing at the corner of a tall building...and in the backdrop the glowing moon shrowded in the clouds...whatever I think it would look really cool.

°Limality

Fri, 27 May 2005 14:43:32 -0400

wip16

okay i did some changes :3 placed teh text somewhere else for now XD and left the english one away...i'd like to say im finished with this wall but i still feel it lacks something :D

ahhh oh well laterz again XD

^tAtEkAnE

Fri, 27 May 2005 14:34:15 -0400

Oh rofl...i remember reading that, but guess my brain shutdown =p

°Limality

Fri, 27 May 2005 14:30:31 -0400

U_u

I SAID I HID THE TEXT XD to not get distracted >_< i didtn say id remove it >_>

kay kay gonna "spread" those darn birds :3

^tAtEkAnE

Fri, 27 May 2005 14:29:09 -0400

Fab=fabulous
noes!
bring back the text!
and you blurred some of the birds too much XD hey try to scatter a bit those birds at the right side...wow..i'm so picky >D

°Limality

Fri, 27 May 2005 14:17:42 -0400

Rofl@tate

btw what do you mean with fab O.O?? FABulous?? XD

neways here is wip15
i hid the text to not get distracted by it ^^.

so i did as tate suggested and yeah, teh birds look good, also notice some debris on the cliff and rolling down the cliff leaving small dustmarks (i think i could still improve those details though what do you guys think?) i think the key for this wallpaper is teh details and i also removed the moon =D

okay i think im gonna think about some things more at this point =/ okay then laterz again :D

@2kool4u
D: gomen, i didnt want to do a city scape because A) i sux XD B) i think she also fits well on a cliff :D C) if youd like ill try to add a city in the background O_O maybe thatll work, but then it's a deserted city :D

`2kool4u

Fri, 27 May 2005 14:10:23 -0400

Hmm I think it would look better if you used the edge of a building instead of an edge of a cliff. I've seen a few episodes of this series and the setting is mostly in a cityscape rather than a landscape. Besides that, it looks really good^^

^tAtEkAnE

Fri, 27 May 2005 13:44:22 -0400

>( don't wanna be a pain in your ass lol...
aside from your future modifications...
can you try making the birds darker? like brown XD..dunno just try it, and blur it a bit, try to see if it looks better XD

for the text
the japanese text looks fab IMO..but the outer glow for the "angel's landing" kinda overwhelms the text..

but all in all your wall has some OWNAGE Possibilities XD

-runs-

°Limality

Fri, 27 May 2005 13:15:45 -0400

wip14

haha kay added the text here but didnt do some things tatekane suggested :D okay well then this is like teh almost final version, imagine this without fscking planet, with sunrays going through the clouds and erm...lotsa details :D

matane :D

^tAtEkAnE

Fri, 27 May 2005 12:06:36 -0400

Hey lima i like the one with the intense sun (not the planet >.>)some would complain about brightness tho =\
justifies the intense light on jo's legs
but needs more rays that passes through the clouds
i dont like the planet -kills the planet-

i like what you did with her scarf..seems mystical
add birds
add some dust blowing in front of her with some bits and pieces of leaves or just bigger clumps of dirt

the rocks she's standing on is better

°Limality

Thu, 26 May 2005 16:37:02 -0400

wip8
wip9
wip10
wip11
wip12
wip13

Ah okay
so eh basically what happened is, from wip8-wip9 i changed the recged scarf parts' colors with a lighter one...it fits much better. i dunno what i did from wip9-wip10 but i think i deleted some strokes visible on the clouds >_> i guess my wall will look very different on other ppls monitors *needs new tft D:* from wip10-wip11 i changed the sky color, it just had to be dusk/dawn since it fits better with the colors of jo's clothes. from wip11-wip12 i resituated her and the cliff to the right side...most people have the icons on the left right? and also a fellow from irc told me that that's more realistic since the lightning on her back isnt so strong so when she'd stay on the left side of the canvas it'd had to be more stronger...or so...then from wip12-wip13 i couldnt withstand my urges as celestial waller and add a moon behind the clouds >_> i made it much smaller then todays celestial people XD they tend to overdo it, since the moon WE see is like ionno 1 inch in diameter XD ? oh yeah also from wip11-wip12 i started to simulate the wind =/ ne suggestions? im still wrestling with those lines...should i blur them? smudge them? erase some parts to get the feeling of wind? and ill add some more stuff in the background...some birds and such...

matane :D