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Athrun & Cagalli wallpaper

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~akinoame

6 years, 9 months ago

 

This is my first time trying to make a wall >< I'd love to have some suggestions and comments~

http://aishiteru.ummu.org/funtimes.jpg

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~chowfun

6 years, 9 months ago

 

First thing you need is a sig. The colours are very nice except the characters are a bit messy, so they need some cleaning up. The arrow that Cagalli is holding is cut off that should be fixable with some smudging also her head is a bit tranparent and you see some of the background showing through. The text is sortof camoflagued with the background. Once fixed it shoudl be a great and colourful wall.

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~akinoame

6 years, 9 months ago

 

Thank you for your wonderful comment =) It will be useful~ I think I do have a sig, it's at the top. But many people have missed it o_O maybe I should relocate it?

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~acidflower

6 years, 9 months ago

 

Hello!! Yeah, I think you should put it down, where most of the time its put mainly because then the taskbar hides it ^^;. Anyways, I love the background!!!! It's awesome!! However, I think you should work a little on the image extracting, because there a few places where its not as nicely done. The images could use some cleaning. Also, I think there a few places where there is a need to use the clone stamp or erhm..whatever you call it. If you fix the renders a bit, it'll turn out really well!! Good luck!

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~rasengan

6 years, 9 months ago

 

make the character more clearer maybe u could consider change the background to a night sky and hav nice firework on it

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~akinoame

6 years, 9 months ago

 

Thanks so much everyone~ your suggestions really gave me inspirations. here's a modified version of it. I changed ALOT of things.

http://aishiteru.ummu.org/funtimes2.jpg

Oh yeah. I'm not completely satisfied with the ocean water. I looked everywhere for a tutorial but all of them just didn't suit the picture... Does anyone know where I can find a good water tutorial?

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~rasengan

6 years, 9 months ago

 

If u wan to add ocean water i suggest u add mountain at the back or u already hav... if it is make it clearer

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~mgsisawesome

6 years, 9 months ago

 

Im sorry that i dont have any good water tips, but i think that the first background was fine. The characters look better in your revised wall, but there are still spots around teh edges (mainly the arrow and teh white "furry thing"). I have to admit that i dont know who these people are, but this is a good job. Good Luck!

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