Ok, its gone through some changes. I really wasnt going to seriously work on it, but I had alot of free time yesterday, so here we are. There are two versions that I like, so which do you think is best, what would make it better, and would either of them pass?
Strawberry King FStrawberry King D
Thanks for the input!
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6 years, 6 months ago
I think the first one is better lol the underwear >.< but you should filter it so it doesn't look real and fuzzy...the fuzzy...O.O though dont over do it like you did with the second one.
6 years, 6 months ago
The vector looks nice except for two parts. 1) His eyes are a bit blurry. 2) The ichigo on his (or aya-chan's) underwear are blurry, i think you should just redo them so it'll be clearer.
The second wallpaper looks too bright because of the background so i suggest you use the first one. The first one though is a bit plain. Maybe if you did something with the strawberries it would look better. I suggest you vector the strawberries so the background and foreground match.
6 years, 6 months ago
Ahahahahaha. I laughed when I saw Manaka in strawberry underwears. This is a hilarious wallpaper. Anyways, his eyes look a bit blurry. Having a plain background, anime picture in front and a realsitic picture in between, they don't really go well with each other in a way. Maybe if you can make the strawberries cartoon'ish it'd look better.
6 years, 6 months ago
as for the vectoring, I'm working from a screen cap, so the eyes are only a blur to begin with. The eyes on him now were pretty much from scratch. I can try again, and maybe make them better. I thought people might complain about empty space so I have a third version for yall to check out.
Ichigo G
6 years, 6 months ago
This totally made me laugh. Such a fun idea! I like the cartoon strawberries, and the black areas look much better with the strawberry pattern although they still look a little too real. His ears still need a little clean up too. A very fun wall paper though!
6 years, 6 months ago
omg... i cant believe ur serious bout submitting it in oh wellz, its not my place to tell u wat to do on to the wallpaper... strawberry king F is definitely the greater of the three the vectoring isnt that bad, the logo blur is kinda weird try to do sumthin with the empty space fillers for some reason, i just dnt like it on any wallpaper overall, if ur that content in this wallpaper, it could actully make it =_=
6 years, 6 months ago
I don't know if you redraw the character or not, but the blurry part of the face really needs some work, i suggest you draw the part back since it is possible to be done.
I got an idea for the vector / bar part, use the effect of the third choice, which has the zoom effect, then pull the vector to the underwear area (adjust the height as you like), try to make the 'zoom' emphasis on the underwear; in the mean time, add more strawberries to the vector, they are quite less if you noticed it, and I think they will help the zoom since you use the light lining (or what looks like flashing bar on the sides) to make the zoom effect. Sorry if i misjudge your method to make this wall.
Looking forward for your updates.
6 years, 6 months ago
Well, X, it's like a joke I want to share, you know? I don't expect that anyone will actually set it as their wallpaper, it's just that I think it'd be funny for it to have a spot on the main page for a few hours. I knew from the start that if the function of this was to be a cool wall, it would fail miserably, but if it was to get a laugh, well... How far it's gone is really amazing to me, and I learned a whole lot about the pen tool, so really, it's done it's job. But then I started thinking, well, if it's gone this far, maybe it could keep on going. So that's where we are, just seeing how far it can go.