Wallpapers and Walling

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~NekoPirate

6 years, 2 months ago

 

I joined this place today, and here's my first wallpaper. Is it good enough to submit? Contructive critism is welcome!

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~baka-neko64

6 years, 2 months ago

 

First of all...you need to make it a much bigger size. The actual size that you will sumbit to be specific. ^_^ It makes it a lot easier to critque if we can see it! But...I do like the background so far. But from what it looks like...the image of the girl doesn't seem to blend into the background that well. It looks like you just extracted it and stuck it on. And the font could probably be better too. I would say that it looked like Times New Roman or something like that.

And don't forget your sig! ^_^

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~NekoPirate

6 years, 2 months ago

 

Thank you so much for the reply, it was v. helpful. ^_^ Here's the second version: Click!I changed the font, signed it, made it larger, but left the image the way it was before, because I like it that way.

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`Red-Eclipse

6 years, 2 months ago

 

The scan needs major cleaning. It's too grainy. It's also only 10% of teh wall. The rest is pretty repetative brushing and patterns. The focus of the wall is too much towrads the bg. Either make it bigger, or if that's its original size, get a bigger scan.

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~azn32boi

6 years, 2 months ago

 

Well.. they said all of it.... I think... Well if you don't want to find a bigger scan, you could always make it into a scene. Maybe she could be sitting on a hill, or something...