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Roxas. A Nobody.

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~HybridSpirit

5 years, 11 months ago

 

I hope you like it. free to suggestions

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~mullen12

5 years, 11 months ago

 

looks good you can vectore roxas or clean him up a bit

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`Almighty-Baka

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Well, this background is incredibly generic, please please please put a more creative foot forward. The top three lines of text are really distracting.. if you want to convey depth vary the size and blur intensity a bit more.

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θblu3angl

5 years, 11 months ago

 

the quality of the scan, it's extraction and excess artifacts, and the quality of the bg are kinda low

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~LadySaotome

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Character is way too blurry & has a lot of white that didn't get extracted. Frankly, the character looks like it got enlarged & that's never a good idea. The moon is too realistic for such a character, the stars are kinda huge. The blurry text makes my eyes hurt. What's he standing on?

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~EdiBomb

5 years, 11 months ago

 

the bg looks too fake.......the moon is pixelated and the stars doesn't look real....the scan is too blury ....

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~JoelzeroJ

5 years, 11 months ago

 

the scan is to blury the text is to blury like you inlarged it clean it up a bit

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~WhiteSunflower

5 years, 11 months ago

 

placement of the notable features is chaotic, and make him stand on something or just make the effect that he's being engulfed in shadows. you might want to try a grungy look cause the words dont really fit with the calm night sky imagery.

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~AnimeLover93

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Wow, okay well the text really makes me fell like Im drunk or something... I really dont like it.. Just use a simple font. And dont blurr it or anything. The moon looks too realistic for this wall. It doesnt fit very well. Roxas looks like you too him from a screen cap and enlarged him. Did you do that? You have to clean him up. Try vectoring him. Click here for a list of tutorials to help you vector. The stars are a little too big for this wallpaper. You need to shrink them.

List of what to work on: *Vector Roxas *Fix font *Shrink Stars

Its not that much for now but work on it.

Listen, I really want you to work at this, it'll come out great in the end, I know it. Now, I'm putting this into my favorites, this is serious now, I'll be back!

♥Kairi

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~HybridSpirit

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Thanks guys. i took a lot of critiscism, but i know ill need it. thanks.

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~HybridSpirit

5 years, 11 months ago

 

im kinda embarresed to say but... i have no idea what vector means.

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~AnimeLover93

5 years, 11 months ago

 

lol no problem.. A vector is like something you do to clean up a character and pretty much make it your own, beacause your like, copying it but you still drew it. It depends what you want to do a vector on. In this case, its a character. But I dont know which tutorial to give you. Do you have photoshop or GIMP? What program do you use?

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~HybridSpirit

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Adobe Photoshop CS2

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~HybridSpirit

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Thanks A lot animelover, your so kind. Seems like your the only one who has faith and hope in me.

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θblu3angl

5 years, 11 months ago

 

btw...more information can be found on The VEctorness Group, they have..EVerything you need to know about vectoring. usually, Illustrator is the best program photoshop might also work. although, i've never tried with PS. go there,and take a look at some tutorials. C: have fun~

{PS. it's right under the group button, click. scrolll down.....-----------------Voila~

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~dnangelchic

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Hmm I like! You could improve it by cleanin Roxas up a bit though. I like the background too, but it's a bit blurry and i agree with the stars being large. Overall nice job! =^_______________^= Yay!

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~AnimeLover93

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Hows it comin? Dont worry about vecotoring Roxas. Maybe you can make a background, THEN place roxas into it... Wanna try that? Okay well if you want to, Shrink down the stars and see if you can find a better moon. Maybe one in the shape of a heart. The post the link here. I'll be back!!

Kairi

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~HybridSpirit

5 years, 11 months ago

 

oh soz i use gimp but ok

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~EdiBomb

5 years, 11 months ago

 

blu3angl, you're sayong that illustrator is better than ps, when it comes to vectorize ??? you sure ?? gotta give it a try then ;)

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~AnimeLover93

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Wow, I cant find a tutorial for vectoring in GIMP anywhere! Maybe start a new thread and ask around...

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θblu3angl

5 years, 11 months ago

 

yeah, Illustrator is the best edibomb XP it's made for tracing i think,,,or something like that. give it a try . and AGAIN

Tutorials can be found on the Vectorness Group, they have tutorials for alot of things, read some of the PS ones and that'll help you with GIMP ones, because they're really similar

but in the resourcepool Gat has posted a link that's for PS, but he uses GIMP and he says that he thinks it works for GIMP too so check it out.

http://www.animepaper.net/group/resourcepool/discussions/20626/

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