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~Pip-Yuki

5 years, 11 months ago

 

K, so here's my first wallpaper here at animepaper. I took the image of Spike from the final episode of Cowboy Bebop. It was easily my favorite episode, so here it is. Wasn't sure about eh background, it's really just generated clouds/smoke. Anyway, any help would be nice. thanks a lot.

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~Saka4Rob10

5 years, 11 months ago

 

I'm not a pro and i can't help a lot but i think that you should make the girl more in the first place (less ghost) and do something about the colour of the guy (it get lighter alittle bit too much). Anyway, wait for better comments.

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θBeckor

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Oke the quality doesnt seem to be to good, the logo on top and bottom looks original but can use some tune up. Mostly cous ya see 'cowboy bebop' trough the top of the upper half of the logo. Spike looks not al tough bad altough he is quite pixely, try to tune him up to. And try to do somethin else then clouds with a opacity julia over it. It looks to simple, maybe use colours and brushes for a more other foggy cloud effect good luck

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~Animator

5 years, 11 months ago

 

The Japanese writing seems a little scrathcy or blurry it hurts my eyes with prolonged viewing which a wallpaper get being on your desktop or whatever. The idea is good an I see where your colour theme comes from however a little contrasting colour such as something bright wouldn't go astray. Also I agree with the ather comment that the cloudy effects need a bit more work or not necessarily take up all that room.

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~Pip-Yuki

5 years, 11 months ago

 

Ok, so I think I'll try my first vectoring on Spike. Animator, you talked about using brighter colors. Are you talking about when I replace the clouds? Finally, how should I fix the japanese text. Should I vector that too? Thanks a lot, everyone. Keep the comments coming.