Wallpapers and Walling

Ok the vector needs work. I can see through the people to the white BG.... Not going to work. You really need to fix that before you even think about messing with the BG.

The background works for me, but the vector is still sort of messy. For example, around the two girls' heads, there are pink outlines, which make the vector look really strange. The heads (especially the hair) need the most fixing.

heh reminds me of my early days *ah memories* in a few years youll be making stuff like me if you keep the hectic style goin. keep at it! GO GO HECTIK PAPERS! yeah those red splatters? they look like blood....not something i think those girls are smiling about

since ive done stuff like this in the past..ive been known to make something like what you have here..then shrink it to about half the size, drag it to a new standard size canvas, then put most of the mess in a quadrant and work from there. when i say quadrant i mean umm like in a number symbol # the points where the lines cross are good parts to place intersting focal points....what you have here is sorta spread out a lil too much.... yes you can have smaller focal point and still looks good...it just depends on how good you are :D dont be afraid to flip those pics & objects to get interesting angles! [chek out my junk. youll see what i mean] ill be watchin you

Ok the vector needs work. I can see through the people to the white BG.... Not going to work. You really need to fix that before you even think about messing with the BG.

Whats wrong with white outlines inside the body? I think it looks pretty cool like that, the hair do look a bit wierd with pink all outlining it...

Oh, and I like version1 better.