Wallpapers and Walling

Extraction could use alot of work. It appears that anything white has become transparent due to the means you've attempted to seperate the scan from the background.

A method along the lines of this would be more suitable. You may also wish to put more effort into the background as simply layering a scan over an image will not be sufficient to have it approved.

The extraction is not good...its a litle dificult to do extraction at renders 3D but I think you can do it ^^ The bg is really nice but it would be better if it was a litle brighter

Wall and scan is way too dark. You need to brighten it up more. Extraction really needs some improving. You can try this Extraction tut. The image is also a bit low quality, clean it using this tut: Clean tut. I wouldn't put a planet in the bg if i were you, I'd try to go for something more abstract-fantasy or abstract-tech. You could always try looking in the wall gallery here and look for inspirations. Good luck!

yeah... its a lil dark and the characters are a lil blury or something. excelent start tho.

make it good.

-mrsleepyhead

definitly think it is a little bit too dark, but nice work tho for the first wallpaper with photoshop, keep up the good work!

Not a bad improvement from your first draft. The light level is good, and the extraction is better than before. But I did notice that your edges have become a bit choppy. Not that i'm experened or anything but I used to have this problem a lot, what you can do to hide small imperfections such as choppy edges, and or bad extraction is to add a glow to the girls. Also using a lighter background would help to hide those things. But I don't recommend just hiding imperfections, it's better to go back and correct them. Plus you get better at it that way.

Just remember ctl+alt+z

Oh yeah one more thing about the background, although it is beautiful, you still might want to change. If you could make it a bit more personal that would be great. It seems like just a stock photo, and dose not complement the girls very well. It may even draw too much attention away from them.

Wow!!!that's some BIG change u R working very hard on this one..keep the good work.

you could see the scan from the three girls uhhh i can still see some white stuff outt here i can see alot of people have been telling you that okie move on well its not rlly iono well why did you decide to exactly put the world there i dunt thik that is spira or anythign lol well think it over or once u think u got a good wallpaper submit it at session zero to listne to pplz other perspectives or if u think it rlly rlly good then and dunt wnana bother seeing other pplz perspectives and stuff and submit itwell thats a 50/50 chance ur gonna take and plus the deletion fined on your papers