Wallpapers and Walling

OMG A D.GRAY-MAN WALL [ spazzes ] [ coughs ] Anyways, onto the comment:

First off, I love the concept of the wall XD Although the title of the wall doesn't really make sense to me: "Benevolence of Agony"? I would expect a more book-ish title for an information based wall, something like "Komui's Secret Files", with a caption on the wall saying "Subject 01: Allen Walker", y'know? To give it that extra humor factor. Unless you're going for something more serious. In which case, just ignore this paragraph.

Also, in his information box, I don't like how you've got the sentence cut off just so the person looking at the wall can read the text. I'd rather be intrigued by the text than have it be cut off randomly so I can read it. So keep the sentence flowing and add more to his bio :D

Anything else? Uh... that's it for now ^_^;; I can't really think of anything else at the moment.

haha great concept!! The tech lines look good...except they're sorta cut off...like, there's a break in the middle. I think you should make them continuous...and yeah, plastic had a bunch of good ideas. the black and white works well, but yeah, fill up his bio box! Mess with the tech lines a little to make it seem more tech-y...and maybe try messing with the picture itself, so that his coat doesn't have that random half tone pattern? Great job!

XD haha sorry. But yeah I like what you've done....VERY nicely edited. =P

umm about the tech lines...you see how at the bottom you have stuff running across the whole bottom? But at the top, there's that black space without anything? That's what I was talking about, about making the tech lines continuous so you don't have that empty spot.

and hm I just realized....if you DO do what I suggest...it'd involved going through the entire picture and adding shadows and highlights. Which, would make it look awesome, but is a CRAPLOAD of work. XD

While you're doing the secret file thing anyways...You see that empty space below the Biography box? Have you thought about posting like...mug shots of Allen?? Might be interesting...just to fill up that space. ^.^

Great minds think alike, neh? ^^ Looking forward to what you come up with. ^.^ Saw your other wall, the one that was accepted. THAT one was nice. This one looks like it could be just as good...maybe better. =P

Migawd. That turned out wonderfully .

One thing: you've got two arrows to Allen saying "Lazy exorcist" and "beansprout". I think you should just have one arrow with the text "AKA Lazy exorcist, Beansprout", or something like that. Y'know, to up the humor factor some more.

I <3 it.

<3

I can't wait to see the rest of the bios XD I wanna know what Komui writes for himself >D

:D I loved aplastictree 's idea to make the "file-type" wallpaper and the final product looks quite appleasing even for one who hasn't even heard of this anime/manga *sweatdrops*!

However, there is one thing that does bother me so... Those brushes you used, all the "tech"-like brushes, and the big splotch of swirlie-thing (pardon my lack of creativity on what to call that little flower-like brush --though I would prefer the wall actually without that brush since everything's already very.. "tech-ified" and I just feel that it's a bit sudden to have a grungy brush like that stick out at the centre. Now, back to what I was trying to say...) are from Aethereality.NET and if you really were to use the brushes in this wall, I think it is crucial that you input some sort of credit where appropriate on the wall itself. Maybe next to your username on the wall, you can slip something like "Brushes by Aethereality.NET" since, well, the brushes were from that site and it is only right for one's artwork to get credited to their respectful owners.

So yup. Otherwise, I did enjoy this wall. :) Just the lack of credit did tip me off a tad there... But that's an easy-fix. :) Hope to see an updated version soon!